[Music] Love Song (this one is actually sorta good)

Started it on two days before Valentine's day and yeah...it's bout 3 mins 17 secs or something.
Based on a movie theme, but i changed the flute/ending so...i hope you all like it (all = everyone except moo who justs says 'good' for everything ;-;)

I'm impressed, you actually wrote in A Major. =o

The best part is towards the end, the rest is really repetitive. You may consider adding another instrument to the mix to fill a lot of the emptiness. The piano parts are pretty cool but I don't think the flute repeating EXACTLY what the piano just played is always good. Every once in a while I would switch things up a bit, but that's just me.

Pretty cool overall. :3

lol thanks, i'll edit it a little.


but tomorrow, as i is eating grapes right now.

I thought it was good. I especially liked the parts where you put extra piano parts in the bottom track. I think I woulda liked it more if the piano and flute parts blended together after a while.

Speaking of writing it in A major, NW, did you actually plan out which notes to use or did you "go with the flow"?~

the piano parts are gorgeous, especially because you're letting them ring out a bit, but yeah, make the flute play something different than the piano.


Nice rhythm with the third track.


Not bad.



The next step I'd suggest with your music is chord progressions. You seem to have a decent grasp of melody and rhythm, but a lot of your work just focuses over one chord.


Bar 145 on is sex.

Thank you all, and i didn't actually know i wrote in A Major ;-;


I'll take your advice and get better and all

Thank you all, and i didn't actually know i wrote in A Major ;-;

Haha.
I have to agree with everybody, the piano is really nice.