[Writing] My Only Wish

[Kokowam]

Lol, I made this poem for a girl I like (lulz romance! ) and I showed it to her and coupla other girls (notice how I didn't show any boys, lol) and they all liked it. They found it "sweet" or "cute" or etc... Just felt like sharing it with you guys.

I feel like some of the rhymes are kinda forced, though.

My Only Wish


You are my joy, you are my life.
I want you as a girlfriend and, in the future, as a wife.
But you won't let me enter into your heart
Which is why, so many times, these wrists have crossed that knife. (not really)

I think about you day and night
Every single hour, not quite.
Try every minute, every second I'm awake,
Taking loving you to a whole new height.

Standing, sitting next to you,
Or even simply glancing at you,
Gives me a feeling I can't describe,
I wish you'd say, "I love you, too."

[JAP]

Aww...

I have to agree with the girls~

It's just "aww"... <3

[Zylos]

It's kinda sweet. What did the girl you like say about it?

[Kokowam]

Haha she liked it. She likes someone else, but I'm still trying.

[JAP]

I'm cheering for you mastermo-san~!