[Visual] ER's PixelArt and Animation

[eternal_renegade]

Well I am working on my pixel art ability, so this is a work in progress. I will continue to post more as  on my journey

http://renegadezer0.deviantart.com/art/Man-Breathing-01-69751216


UPDATE 01:

[Kokowam]

Looks very nice but he seems to be leaning too much forward.

[eternal_renegade]

Yeah That was definitely a problem I had foreseen, however open for interpretation is it can be used as if he is breathing heavily after something that took a lot of energy/stamina. But yeah I might want to make an extra frame with him standing up completely straight.

[Lavata]

Looks nice. However, as Mastermoo pointed out: he is leaning too much forward. Looks like he is gonna crack off at the knees. Usually (from what i can tell, anyway =P) when someone has used alot of energy and falls forward, they bend at the back and keep the knees mostly straight. However, here it seems to be like his back is straight and his knees are bent. Anyway, it is indeed a great animation. Tons better than what I can hope to do, at least =)

[eternal_renegade]

Thank-you for the input! I should probably go back and fix a few of those little things. And I will!

EDIT:

Updated the animation, he is standing up a bit straighter at the start of the animation and increased the frames.

[biohazard]

Hey, pretty nice stuff, needs more shading / outlining.  And just move the legs forward and you have a straight breathing man.  Looks pretty good so far, but remember, you always have a long way to go.

[eternal_renegade]

Right, ok I will try that. Umm Actually there is no shading/outlining/or highlights yet. I was just going to keep it simple for now until I perfect the animation as much as I can.