[Music] This song isn't complete, i'm just asking opinions

Okay, i was trying to tab FF-X-2 lightwaves one, but the thing ddin't come right and another tune came up. SO this is the tab(tab only) and i want someone non-mastermoo too tell me whats BAD in it.

Yes, mastermoo, tell me wats BAD in it.

edit: yes, it's about 10 secs long.
yes it contains only one piano.
yes its 7-stringed -.-

edit: midi

LOL Okay, I'll edit this post once I'm done.

EDIT: Okay, it sounds good but I think the second from the bottom line (E string or w/e) all the 5's should be 6's.

It's off key and doesn't really go anywhere, but it flows kinda nicely.

Yeah, the note that I kinda fixed makes it sound less off-key. You can really hear the Memories of Lightwave in it XD Esp with the fixed note. XP

:O
THanks for the comment/critisizm/i love nightwolf posts. I'll improve on it

Re-post: Forget that song, i finally got the third thingy for lightwaves.

<3 I won't midi until its over <3