[Visual] Another Signature ~

firerain · October 27, 2007, 05:50:39 PM

Which version do you like best?

The Shadow · October 27, 2007, 05:56:56 PM

The second one.

firerain · October 27, 2007, 06:04:57 PM

Thanks! Criticism and comments are appreciated!

The Shadow · October 27, 2007, 06:25:59 PM

I couldn't think of any negative oon both of them. My head is kind of empty right now. $:-\$

biohazard · October 27, 2007, 08:16:23 PM

Second one because I like red over yellow.

Arrow · October 28, 2007, 05:05:59 AM

I would say first if it weren't for the green bits. Second.

Leventhan · October 28, 2007, 05:30:41 AM

The bottom/second one.
Somehow the colors you used makes the first one looks blurry. $:-\$

firerain · October 28, 2007, 02:05:52 PM

New Version! Now with depth and cool lighting!

Grafikal · December 01, 2007, 08:04:37 PM

Yeah, the newest version you posted is the best. It fixed the problems I WAS going to address before I read to the bottom. Haha. I was going to say that the subject matter was actually quite difficult to pick up. The contrast would've needed to have been turned up or to add an effect to have it stand out better. However, as I got to the bottom I saw your newest one and I must say that it is really good. I like how weight of the image is on the left now with the subject matter on that side. The lighting effects fix the contrast problems from before and it brings it out from the background now. Before it was just too busy and confused the eyes. I think maybe the kerning between the F and I in your name could use a some more. I get lost reading the F to the I. At first, for some odd reason, I read the capital letter A then -rerain. Hahaha. It looked like 'Arerain'.

There ya go!

My critique. Haha.