Yeah, the newest version you posted is the best. It fixed the problems I WAS going to address before I read to the bottom. Haha. I was going to say that the subject matter was actually quite difficult to pick up. The contrast would've needed to have been turned up or to add an effect to have it stand out better. However, as I got to the bottom I saw your newest one and I must say that it is really good. I like how weight of the image is on the left now with the subject matter on that side. The lighting effects fix the contrast problems from before and it brings it out from the background now. Before it was just too busy and confused the eyes. I think maybe the kerning between the F and I in your name could use a some more. I get lost reading the F to the I. At first, for some odd reason, I read the capital letter A then -rerain. Hahaha. It looked like 'Arerain'.
There ya go!
My critique. Haha.