My Project: Well in the Woods - A Story About Friendship

Alrighty mates, here we go...
Tell me what you think, oh & PLZ!! CRITICIZE.....I value your input.....

Introduction
Blake Chambers is a thirteen year old boy that the world has forgotten. Despite the neglection and partly because of it, he is a courageous young man, but at the same time, an extremely quiet boy. His brother Jacob on the other hand; being an aspiring pop star is the complete opposite. Loving to rub his fame in his younger brother's face, Jake is arrogant and selfish. Their mother is no better. She enjoys leeching off of Jake to get what she wants, and pays practically no mind to Blake what so ever. Blake's father however playful and kind, is never home to see his kids, because of work. The family resides in rural Massachusetts in a two story house filled with five bedrooms and bad memories. The most devastating of which; occurred only two short years ago, when Blake and Jake's baby sister Sophia disappeared when she was only seven years of age. The search party assigned to find her was able to locate the lucky trinket that she carried with her always. It was found next to an old well that lies behind the house, however nothing more was recovered. It was as though she had vanished into thin air, and decided to leave no traces of her whereabouts to anyone other than the trinket. There may just be more that old well than meets the eye.

The story takes place after falling into the well. You tumble down the well and become submerged beneath the water. When you pop up for air, you find yourself in a dark cave, and you instantly know...your not at home anymore...The place you have arrived at, is calle Wruterius, a magical planet filled with wonders beyond a person's imagination.

Races include: Humans, Fairies, Scurges, Trolls and Ogres, Treants, Goblins and more.....

Story
After making your way out of the cave, you are greeted by a cautious fairy who is not hesitant to draw his weapon. He examines you, and sees that you are no threat to him, little do you know that this fairy is the strongest warrior inhabitant of the Fairy Kindom!! He guides you to the kingdom as he does with all others that he comes across. When you arrive you are presented before the fairy elder who explains your situation. He also tells you that the fairies are willing to put you up for the night, but in the morning you must embark on a journey across the many lands of Wruterius in search the human civilization.

Characters

Main Character:
Blake Chambers - 13 years old `human`
Beginning Class - Soldier
Ending Class      - Knight of Valor

Secondary Character:
Gil               - 492 fairy years old (19) `fairy`
Beginning Class - Fairy Warrior
Ending Class - Fairy Knight of Honor

Third Character:
Ayass          - 271 fairy years old (12) `fairy`
Beginning Class - Assassin in Training
Ending Class - Fairy Assassin

Fourth Character: (Animal)
Kitzer           - 111 scurge years old (9) `scurge`
Beginning Class - Scurge
Ending Class - Scurge


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Blake'sHouse Upstairs:

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Blake'sHouse Yard:

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Blake'sHouse Driveway:(BusStop)

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SnowyPass:

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FairyForest:

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Shop:

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Dungeons Include: but not limited to

Fairy Forest
Thorn Jungle
Mystic Mountain
Snowy Pass
Kalimar Lake
Sogad Swamp
Carluscious Cave
Lucovv Woods
Pyrock Volcano
.....may be more eventually - this may be enough

I really like your screenshots. Very good work.
Looking forward to see more of it.

The mapping is pretty good, and the story has a nice, Narnia-esque feeling to it. Good luck with this game.