The cure (Only screen shots and story line)

The cure
Hey guys , my english isn't the best , but i hope you'll understand me.

Story line:
Its about a boy name Tommy , which his mom gets sick , and he is going to find the cure.
( this is only the basic , but later i will add details. )

Screen shots:

Shot at 2007-06-26
this is his mom's room


Shot at 2007-06-26
This is Donut island (world map view)


Shot at 2007-06-26

and this is .. well .. a tree


My only problem with the game , is that its made in rpg maker 2003 , and well i want to add some scripts to the game
and i cant XD

come on guys , its not a REALLY bad game,
And iam looking for somone that will help me with the story line.

oi i like the tile sets   and the style of the sprites

just wait ppol will be bustin and postin just need to be patient

Well i have to say the tile-sets look sexy so do the characters, but i can't comment on much more than that until you add a few more things.
Then i will give it a sexy scale rating

looks good with the screen shots, lets hear more of a story!

I like the mapping, but is that an airship as a boat 

And Rpg Maker 2003 doesn't support scripts btw

I like the sprites, very nice. The story is good, but let's hear more about it.

I know rpg maker 2003 doesnt support scripts 
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about the ship - its a regular ship
spoiler about the ship:

Spoiler for:

Later in the game it can fly.

And I will try to explain the story line with my rusty english...(warning: this maybe a spoiler)

Spoiler for:

The boy (Tommy) is dealing with 2 problems , the first is that his mom is sick and he needs to find to cure,
he is traveling all over the world finding the items needed for this cure.
the second , is that the places that he need to go to , are full with problems their self,
and Tommy need to solve those problems in exchange (or not) for those items.
The black wizard is causing problems all over the world , and tommy joins the army of the white wizard
and joins the war later.

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Also , I got some new screen shots for you guys:
Oh , and sorry , you can see his name in the game is "zack" but i noticed that after i've uploaded it (lol)
Battle system...

Shot at 2007-07-02

Sorry can't tell

Shot at 2007-07-02


Shot at 2007-07-02

Wow, nice looking tilesets! Oh, is White Knight the only character that'll be joining the party? Or is there some other guys?

looking good! just want more scoop of the story (nice tilesets!)

Excellent looking maps, and nice Boos for enemies. xD

Thank you all for your comments
And sorry I can't tell more about the story , or else it will effect the game play , I said enough anyway lol.
White knight is working for the White wizard , sorry but no , he will not join the party.
Edit: Sorry I know understand your question...
There will be more characters in the party , dont worry.
Another edit:
Guys , I have a question , but I'm nore sure its the right place...
I want to make an event to follow hero ( not like the 'follow hero' option in the move event option )
when an event actually behind the hero and really stick to him ,like in pokemon yellow.

Well the game is starting too look sexy now!!, but i still can't give ya a sexy scale rating just yet, sorry.

i think you should add those shot to your first post =)

love your battlers =)

stuff are getting more and more better

Hey guys , Iam very close to make a demo...
But my only problem , is my english is'nt good , And i need somone to change the spell in the game.

its ok im not good with english also for it is not my first language i dont mind do post your demo