[Visual] My picture i drew..

[Zainox]

Heres a picture of my main chara in my game that i drew a while ago.

So what you all think of it? Ill be posting more of my work here so i hope you like them.

[Lavata]

Nice. Everything seemes to be in order except for the hands, which seem a tad too small.  His feet also appear to be a tad bit flat and don't really have much depth to them. Other than that..I don't seem much wrong with it.

[Arrow]

In addition to that, the length of the upper arms is a bit off. Fix all that and you should be set!

Why is he naked?

[Zainox]

Why is he naked?

Lol , i thought somebody would ask that. In my game you get to choose what they wear so you start of naked.
Yea it is a bit out of proportion, I'm really bad with hands, legs and feet, they are the parts of the body I'm worst at.
Thanks for the comments so far.

Anyway heres the colour version:

How do you think i went, i need criticism cause i want to get better at this.

[Winged]

Awesome! The boxers/undies seem a bit too attached to his skin though, you might want to loosen them up. Nice colouring, what do you use (excuse how I spell "color", I'm from Australia ><")

Oh btw, are you from anime-eden?

~Winged

[Zainox]

Its ok I'm from Australia too. I used Paint Shop Pro to colour it, and thanks for the tip ill loosen his boxers then.

About your question about me being from anime-eden i have no idea what it is, what is it?

[Winged]

Anime-Eden is an anime forum, I think I saw someone else who draws a bit like you there.

OMG, AUSTRALIA? Do you watch S.O.O? If so, Blues or Queensland?

~Winged

[Zainox]

Nope haven't seen S.O.O i think, depends what it stands for cause i might have seen it, cause i have no idea what S.O.O stands for. I'm from South Australia, and also ill post my girl Ive drawn soon. Just a little warning i absolutely suck at drawing chicks, so its way out of proportion and the lines are thick as cause my pencil was blunt, lol.

[Lavata]

I seem to like the head of the colored version more than the un-colored one and the body of the un-colored one more than the colored one.  Anyway, it's good that you at least drawing the hands and feet instead of hiding them (like I sometimes do >.>). If you feel like your worst at those then just draw hands and feet. I also hate hands and feet -.-

[Leventhan]

The legs are ginormous
Coloring is nice, though.

[biohazard]

Want me to touch it up?

[Zainox]

Ok, if you want..

[Irock]

Great! But why does he lack balls..and a penis?

[Zainox]

Ahhh... Ummmm.... Ill redo that... Lol hahaha he got no balls.. Thanks for pointing that out.

[mangadude5760]

A man has to have his manly region, no? lol

[Zainox]

Lol true and he will... Eventaully.

[Winged]

S.O.O= State Of Origin= NRL game between Blues (NSW) and Queensland =D

~Winged

[Zainox]

Yeah The only sports i watch are basketball, football (Aussie Rules, Go the crows.) and soccer.. I dont usally watch NRL unless its a big game and dad makes me.. Witch he cant any more cause i dont see him..  Long story short he didnt pay maitenance so mum wont let us see him..

Anyway more to come, im drawing more pics and scanning them almost daily now so yeah keep a look out.. 

[Zainox]

Wooo update:
Heres a sword i drew:

Tell me what you think of this sword design. Ill colour it and post it back on so it looks better, untill then i want to know what you think of it.. Heres also something else i did:

And heres something else i kinda rushed. I have no idea what it is, i just drew random stuff and it turned into this..

Anyway hope you like them and more to come.. 

[mangadude5760]

Sword is awesome but it kinda curves a bit.  Weird lizard/bird guy is great too.  keep it up man. 

[Lavata]

You seem to like drawing people in that position, dont you?

Well...the chest area should be more square. As of now it appears to be too round and it seems like your man-bird has boobs.

[Zainox]

Yeah i was going to fix that but the bell went for lunch lol.. Also i don't usually do my dudes in that position i only really just started that.. I have no idea why. Ill try and do the next picture i scan perfect, lets see how i go..

[Lord Dante]

since his legs seem to be backwards (in that bird/oddly jointed way), you should make it more apparent, as right now it simply looks malformed.

[Winged]

The feet seem a bit flat but it's good so far ^^

Oh btw, nice sword ^^

~Winged

[Doctor Professor Nikolai]

Good work, add clothes xD