[Music] Holy shit, a Zypher music thread?!

Yeah, it's me all right. I wrote this a little while ago and just got done rearranging the lyrics and shizz. Lemme know how it is.

mp3 version may or may not come, depends on whether I want to do it or not.

Also, as in most songs you'll hear from me the oboe/clarinet is the vocal line.

Spoiler for Song Info:

Title: A Request
Artist: Me, obviously
Album: None yet, but I might make one
Genre: I dunno. Emo/post-hardcore, maybe?
Length: 3:07

Spoiler for Lyrics:

These tears keep on falling
As I look out the window
At the skies, turning gray,
And the light from a sun forever fading
The raindrops splashing in time
To the saltier tears from my eyes
This hurt, it can't ever cease
And I'm down on my knees
As I beg you to tell me why

I'm here reminiscing
I can still taste us kissing
And our first, it was under the tree
At the park on Redwood Street
(Tell me why)
But through this window of past
There's a world never destined to last
What was once reality
Has become memories
And I ask you to tell me

Why you're gone
And explain why it's over
Can you tell me why two lovers
Will not ever be lovers again

I'm closing the curtains
But the door is still open
And I'll never close it until
You come over with a reason

Nice work. Lyrics fit very very well, and the music works perfectly. Yet another point scored for dodobutt.

<3 love it!

I found it to be very cliche, but for a cliche song, it works, because it's a quality kind of cliche, and you'll still make money off of that.

It was very well written, and everything fit very well. No clashes, no confusion, very clean cut.
Only uses 4 chords. Well, technically, it only uses 3, lol. The chord from bar 2 is actually the second in version of the chord from bar 4.
Okay, in the chorus, there's a 4th chord. Alright. 4 chords, total.

Lol, sorry.

And I was actually kinda hoping for some dissonance, but oh well.


Good for what it is.

There was some dissonance in the overdriven guitar track, where it goes as:

Code: [Select]

E  :----------------|
B  :6-6-6-*-5-*-5-5-|
G  :7-7-7-*-7-*-7-7-|
D  :----------------|
A  :----------------|
E  :----------------|

though it was kind of quiet. Thanks for being honest.

LOL, God, the one you gave me 2 months ago is like.

Different.

I love you <3

Wow, lyrics  . Awesome. Actually like the idea of singalongs that unknown people make