[Writing] Game planning

Here we go, I have a storyline for a game I'm making and am wondering if its worth continuing with.

As Gurdam approaches the five races of Dennalum are thrown into turmoil as each of their leaders disappear from the face of the earth, tipping the fragile balance of the two planes from equality to the Fa'lor plane and opening a rift between worlds, only the strange Mystics know what to do to restore the balance, but to get to them, a seemingly impossible path of danger and wild magic awaits. The five races, having been sieged by the Fa'lor since the rift opened, banded together and held a tournament to find the five people who would journey along the Infinite Road and find the Mystics. One hero would come from each race and one would be from any of the four races. As each hero was found, a sacred magi deck was given to them and a blade forged from one of the Eternal flames was also given. As the band of saviours met for the first time, the council of Elders gave them their goal and name. The Forlorn were to seek the knowledge of the Mystics and return with the vital knowledge to restore balance to the world.

So let me know what you think and give me some more ideas for weapons, storyline, items, monsters and everything else and hopefully my first game will be a work of art (or work in progress).

I'm thinking of calling it Legends.

It sounds good but kinda like a bunch of cliches put together but that's kinda what makes it sound good.  Legends is a bit of a generic name.  You might work on it but it's a good fall back title I think.  The names sound really cool so far of the places.  I'll try to help you anyway I can if you'd like.  I can't think of anything right now though.

Yay, someone replied to my post. Thank you for your feed back:D but unfortunately my game is turning into one big mess with me coming up with pointless things to do and the weapons have the wrong strength and the monsters are too weak or too strong and I helping my friend with his game and everything just falling apart so I think I might just leave it and start a new game.

Sometimes you have to give up somethings for progress.  Maybe you'll get a better (and easier) idea later.

 

It sounds very cliche. And i agree that ledgends is a generic name. Try to spice it up abit. What makes this story different from the rest? Try to make it special. Original. Keep it up.