Lifeforce.. [Rm2k]

Game Name: Lifeforce..
Main Character: Toyan
Story: Welcome to a world where children are valued by their strength.. welcome to a world where theytake slaves every day.. where villages teach their children to feel nothing, so if a loved one is taken, they will not feel pain...
Welcome... to Ellaseer..

The story starts (and ends) in the small village in the middle of Ellai Valley. Toyan notices his sister is missing, and is told to find her. He finds her near Cherry pond (Lielli), her usual retreat.
As they are talking, His sister (named Shino) asks Toyan about their father, who was taken 13 years ago. She asks what he was like.. Toyan replies: "He was a great man.."
Suddenly, there is a roar. Toyan and Shino look up, startled. A group of men on black beasts are approaching. Toyan yells at Shino, to get away. But he was too late. The leader of the group smashes Toyan in the face, knocking him out, and grabs Shino. "This one will make a fine slave.."

Toyan wakes up to see his village burned to the ground.. and his family are nowhere to be seen.

Features: Nothing special, just your usual RPG.

Team members working on it:
Just me right now, anyone who wants to help, just PM me.

Screens:

Title screen: (Thanks to jap0911)


Hometown:


Comments?

confused, it says starts and ENDS, will that mean it will only play in one town, or we will leave, then return at the end of game.

Second

It sounds interesting! xD Can't wait for the screenshots!
And can you add more details? Like more about the characters or backgrounds?

Uh.. how about this:

Main Good guys:
Name: Toyan
Gender: Male
Age: 17 years
family: Mother, 1 sister
Weapon: Jagged blade (His fathers)
Personality: Quiet, emo.

Name: Shino
Gender: Female
Age: 16
family: Mother, 1 brother (Toyan)
Weapon: None
Personality: Wondering, willing to learn new things.

Saghira
Gender: Male
Age:14
family: Brother (Orphans)
Weapon: Broadsword
Personality: Bright, hyperactive

Naiokumai
Gender: Male
Age: 400
family: Not known
Weapon: None, spellcaster
Personality: Mysterious,
Notes:Naiokumai is Elven, a dying race.

Lance:
Gender: Male
Age: 31
Family: None
Personality: Normal.. like any other normal person.
Notes: He's (trying) to teach Saghira, but since Saghira is so energetic..

Name: The legendary Chibli
Age: 45
Family: None
Weapon: A giant hammer
Personality: Boastful, says he can do anything.
Notes: A select few know that he can't really fight, he's just faking it. Most people idolize him.

Main Evil Characters:
The Empire
Gender: Unknown
Age: 200+
family: None
weapon: Assassin, Gur'shaavark forces, Tiantosuva' forces
Personality: Ruthless, not much known about him/her.

General Raa'rai
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Race: Gur'shaavark
Weapon: Pike
Personality: Ruthless
Notes:leader if the Gur'shaavark forces

Assassin
Gender: Male
Age: 500
Race: Elven
Weapon: Scymitar
Personality: Mysterious, polite, yet a thirst for blood

Iontuvair
Gender: Unknown
Age: Unknown
Race Tiantosuva'n
Weapon: anything
Personality: Beastlike
Notes: leader of the Tiantosuva' forces.

In my opinion, if the gamer loves literature (like me), it's no-no.
If the gamer loves fast reading, it's great.

Okay, okay... It's better than before. But perhaps you should add more labels. Cuz if there's a different race, don't put it in personality. Instead of it, add a label: Race.

Hope that helps in writing.

lol, how about now?

that sounds pretty neat.

Nicer! 

Sorry if I'm bothering you so much with writing...

Hope you guys don't mind if I post screens later tomorrow, do you?

And, no, it's no trouble at all. I'm a crap writer..

Of course I don't mind. I'll check it tomorrow if you done with screenshot.

(me myself didn't even finish any maps yet LOL)

Ya, but I will probably will be using chars from other games, unless I can figure out what they will look like then I could request some charsets.

Perhaps you should recruit spriter.

Probably. Is there any good spriters here?

Post in the Team/Tester Recruitment.

Oooof...  When i read "LIFEFORCE", i thought you where making a fangame about Konami's NES space shooter
It also come to mind that 80's movie of that cute naked space vampire girl 

So... you came here hoping to see a naked vampire..?

So... you came here hoping to see a naked vampire..?

Is there a better motivation? 

Obviously not...

Whoa, your using RM2K too!
Your game sounds good. can't wait to see it done.

Screens:

Title screen: (Thanks to jap0911)


Hometown:

Looks good. I think you should copy those on your first post so the srceens will be easily acsessible.

Done, edited the chracters and story. Check first post and character post.

You should do the same thing with char bios. Spoilers might be helpful for them as well. Very nice, the game looks pretty good.

Thanks. It actually works! I've got the entire intro done, I'm up to the part when Shino gets taken. Its raining then, probably cause it was raining when I made that bit.