MY Final Fastasy Game

Hey this is a demo of my game if you could download and play it and give me some ideas on how 2 make it better thank you

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=6C6ZJN05




The story is set after Final Fantasy 10 and before Final fantasy 10 part 2 and it is about a group of 15-17 year olds unawere of Sin's return and are attacked by sin spawn but are saved by Auron then they set off on there own quest to stop Sin like Yuna and all the rest of the guardians did before them along with new enemies and old friends such as Tidus  this game will also include FF7 and kingdom hearts charcters also although this is only a demo and much more is needed to be done

Characters In the game

Heros

Josh A reletive of Tidus
Jack- is related to no one from the final fantasy game but is brother to Jess
Jess is a summoner and is related to Jack being his sister
Chris- Jack and josh's best friend
Auron From the FF10 game but using different grafics
Tidus- From FF10
Squall(maybe)
Axel(maybe)
Sora and riku from kingdom hearts maybe not to sure yet)

so a big range of people that you can play with may also include party swicher

NPC non player charcters that help you

Owakka- the guy that sell you goods form FF10

Im also going to include the Albed language if i can get it to fit in with my game i'm not quite sure yet tho.

Enemies

Domin- summoner
Lezeric- Domin's guardian
Chezer or cheser spelt both ways Domins Guardian
thats all the enemies so for i will include some more as i update my game.

If you would like to see any of the enemies pictures or hero's pictures please let me know and I will put them on thankyou and enjoy my demo.


Okay I am re making my game the picture you see is old.

At least put a screenshot, A Small Info of the Story...and some characters =/

That way it would bring people's Attention.

Okay sorry im kinda new u see so i didnt no

The screenshot of the house looks kinda weird-ish, no offense. Nouman has a house making tutorial somewhere that should make it look cleaner. Probably in the tutorial index. Also, just as feedback (not saying your game is crappy), there are couple of spelling/grammar errors. Also, when tinting the screen to make the effect, remember to put a "Wait" command right after it having the same amount of wait frames as the transition time. If you don't, then the whole effect is ruined by a quick flash of black and then going to some other scene in about 3 seconds. I didn't play much but so far it looks good! One final thing: when compressing into a game disk, remember to archive the stuff so no one can steal your ideas and maps and etc.

Yes okay thank you im kinda new u see had it for a while nut tjis is my first game really no offence taken thanks ill try and do better

Hmm, the house looks kinda funny. You may want to look at some tutorials for mapping, and saying it's your first game, some tutorials on game creation. Good luck with your game! 

House does look a bit weird, but if this game is gonna have FF7 in it (particularly Cloud or Sephiroth as playable characters), then I'll support it.  FF7 and Kingdom Hearts are right now my favorite RPG's, with Golden Sun 1&2 coming close behind.