Screenshot Thread

[rofl1337]

@ShortStar
interesting look, although I am more into sideview-battlesystems


pls rate

[The Shadow]

Looks pretty good, but it almost cross the line of being to dark.

[ShortStar]

I'd say too dark.

[XIV]

@rofl1337 If you intensify the lights a bit, the darkness could definitely work.

[Pokey]

 Just a 5 minute map. An abandoned beach at dusk.

[CodeMaster]

Looks really nice I give you 9/10 The boulders seem a little out of place.

[Forty]

It feels empty. It could probably use more weeds.

[Pokey]

Looks really nice I give you 9/10 The boulders seem a little out of place.

Thanks! actually, the boulder is my player
was trying it out for an event system.

It feels empty. It could probably use more weeds.

Ya, its not finished... I'm too lazy XD

[TDS]

Guess the games and win a cookie. Guess the inspiration and you're a witch/wizard.

[Irock]

I don't like the way the sprites are at 200% size. I think it's strange to have the sprites pixel doubled but everything else normal size.

[pacdiggity]

There's also one black square at the back of the floor. 'Sup with that?
I agree with Irock. However, 100% would be too small, no? Perhaps 150%?

[TDS]

I'd be more than happy to use the appropriate sized sprites to make my scripts, if I could make then.

Since I can't, I take what I can get.

[mouse]

Potential landing page redesign. Do you feel the quality befits a commercial game?

Before (current page):



After (proposed page):

[hiromu656]

It looks pretty snazzy to me.

[mouse]

I've had people elsewhere say the parchment and maps look like they're "ripped off a shitty flash game"... what do you think?

[CodeMaster]

Face in top left corner is slightly off if it is sapposed to be in the box and the parchment look a little bright but not bad.

[Strak]

Reminds me of the old days of Adventure Quest...

[joy]

Still tweaking the look...and need to decide on if I wanna do an overlay...but yeah..it's a reef.

[Irock]

That looks really neat. My only complaint is that the chest doesn't look like it's laying flat on the sand, like it's not at the correct angle.

[Sashikinaroji]

I've had people elsewhere say the parchment and maps look like they're "ripped off a shitty flash game"... what do you think?

Might be TL:DR territory, if so, skip to the last paragraph.

That's likely because the edges are all darkened... This makes it look unreal, because paper doesn't work that way... Neither does parchment, for that matter...

to make it look more realistic, go ahead and take a piece of paper and put it into light from a source other than directly above, prehaps have a lamp next to the table it is on. Notice the pattern of light. You'll see that there really isn't much difference in shadow at all because you are looking at a flat surface. The only way you would have such deep shadows would be if you had other items casting them.

Also, I like how they looked ripped, but they also don't look believeably ripped. If you wanted to do that, it would end up looking more personalized and unique while also giving you a reason to put shadows (because a ripped piece might be curled up and therefore casting a shadow on another piece.

The map looks very plain, perhaps you should draw a map, rather than simply placing points of interest on a blank page covered in squiggles.



In short, Complexity and and attention to detail breeds originality, so make sure that you take a few minutes to get an idea of what you want... I would suggest you actually make a menu out of real paper using a light source when remaking this menu so that you get better results. Also, I would suggest actually scanning samples of your own writing to use in the menu to make it more realistic and unique.

[joy]

OotM time!

I've worked on this thing til my eyes are crossed..still loads to do..but a WIP shot.

[pacdiggity]

=O
Well done. That looks great already.
I can't wait to see it complete (but don't rush yourself!)

[cozziekuns]

Looks incredible joy. The positioning is a bit off but as you said it's still a WIP.

[Strak]

The text is such a close colour to the background that it makes it slightly difficult to read, but otherwise it's fantastic.

[Thunder Wave]

I think the text color is perfect you just need a glow or a different shade around it so the text is more prominent.