My apologies for not using quotes, my phone doesn't quite agree with them.
Anyhow, I'm really liking your map, Heretic. I've been experimenting with a similar effect (though not with a giant eye, of course) but I haven't been able to make a lot of progress as of late. I'm with Namkor, though, I'd love to see it in action.
As for your map, Drbigt, I really can't say, mostly because I can't actually see the map beyond the few luminated segments. I like what I can see, though. I'm particularly fobd of that yellowish region near the edge.
Littlesaytr, I love the character art. I'm not too fond of the fonts, though, and I can't say I'm a fan of important words being of both a different color and in brackets. That's just me, though.