Adventures of Halo Zero

[Confederacy]

Yes, I am working on another RPG (after the failure known as U Tournament). This ones called Adventures of Halo Zero. Before you say anything, like "I hate Halo", this has nothing to do with Halo (except the installer). It's actually about a community of members from Halo Zero forums (now dubbed, The Veteren's Lounge), Dobermann forums, etc, go on an adventure to stop an evil from destroying all of the world. The first beta demo is out, http://www.filehosting.cc/?d=742CF1B94<-download here.

I'll add screenshots once I upload them.

The characters are pretty bland. You don't need their bio, because they are actual people. And the text isn't the best, but it's not finished yet, so you don't need to fret. You'll get to know the characters later on, but the demo takes place in the Prolouge Chapter. And yes, I am in this game.

[:)]

game crashes, mapping = needs work. wrong use of mapping tiles.
(played for 10 seconds)

Edit: more of what is listed above happens in the game after around 1 min of playing.

Misuse of tiles: Doors. You used window tile.
Crash: when you leave your house and try to go back in/ walk in between the boy/girl in the second map.

[Morris Lawry]

game crashes, mapping = needs work. wrong use of mapping tiles.
(played for 10 seconds)

Edit: more of what is listed above happens in the game after around 1 min of playing.

Misuse of tiles: Doors. You used window tile.
Crash: when you leave your house and try to go back in/ walk in between the boy/girl in the second map.

Yeah, most of that i agree on/happens to me

[Confederacy]

I know about the windows. I made it like that. I know where the doors are at, and I will use them for the next RPG I make.