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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Arrow on February 28, 2011, 08:49:19 PM

Title: [Music] The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on February 28, 2011, 08:49:19 PM
Okay, everyone has their own topic, and it makes it really easy for your stuff to get buried when things get posted. In order to stimulate better flow of constructive criticism, I've made this topic and stickied it. Just post your work, and do your best to give helpful insight to the posts before you.

This is a topic that you can necropost.



I'll kick things off with this.

I was playing Mega Man IV, and I got to the wily stages when a pretty groovy chip tune started playing. It was a little uncharacteristic of Mega Man games up until that point, in that it went in a different sort of direction musically. So I decided to arrange it on a whim, and in about a day total I came out with this. I'd call it finished, other than tweaks and adjustments. What do you all think?


Download http://dl.dropbox.com/u/355499/Mega%20Man%204%20-%20Wily%20Citadel.mp3

If the RMRK MP3 player still isn't working properly, you can click here (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/355499/Mega%20Man%204%20-%20Wily%20Citadel.mp3).
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Holkeye on February 28, 2011, 08:53:05 PM
Isn't this the whole point of having an auditorium? So we don't need a thread like this?
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on February 28, 2011, 08:56:52 PM
This is more of a work in progress thread- I have something finished up there I know, but this is a place where you can just post snippits of things as well. Also, like I said, things tend to get buried and songs / topics get ignored, which can be a bit discouraging I think. If there are a bunch of different things in the same topic, people are more likely to see a wider variety of artists / songs, and through that convenience, more likely to listen / post.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Holkeye on February 28, 2011, 08:58:06 PM
I guess. I'm not buying it, but its worth a shot.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on February 28, 2011, 08:59:37 PM
Try to think of it as the musical equivalent of the screenshot thread. Everyone has their own game topic, for the most part, but in that thread you can say "Hey, look at this map" or, "Is this tile set funky?"
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Acolyte on March 01, 2011, 12:42:13 AM
I like the song. It's very catchy and upbeat. ^^
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Japur on March 01, 2011, 07:47:48 PM
Yes, it's very catchy indeed. Like the 8-bit style.


This topic is just what I needed! What do you guys think of this little sample I wrote? It's for an iPhone game I'm working on.

I have two versions, actually. The first one is a version with the wistle as a lead instrument, the second with an acoustic nylon guitar. Which one is better?

Download http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20831426/MenuMusic3-1.mp3 (Whistle)

Download http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20831426/MenuMusic3-2.mp3 (Nylon Guitar)

Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Sophist on March 01, 2011, 09:28:18 PM
Awesome, awesome work, Arrow. I like the Rush-like sound around 1:30 in particular, it's overall wonderful.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on March 02, 2011, 05:12:34 AM
I really liked working with the Mega Man 7 samples, they work really well together and they can be pretty damn versatile. Thanks, guys.

Japur: Both sound good. It's weird how much change that one instrument seems to have on the song. I listen to the one with the whistle, I think of the original Paper Mario on the 64. When I listen to the one with the guitar, all I can see is Harvest Moon. Like I said, both sound good, just go with the one you like more.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on March 02, 2011, 10:03:25 AM

After listening to this...

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEaiKzUiMpg" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEaiKzUiMpg</a>


I started working on this...

Download http://dl.dropbox.com/u/355499/Mega%20Man%2010%20-%20Wily%20Stage%202.mp3
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Madurai on March 09, 2011, 07:53:44 AM
This is the Opening to Divided Infinity, the game I'm currently directing,
Written and Sung by Diana Kantor

EDIT: How to I actually embed the song in the thread? =o
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: MetalRenard on April 04, 2011, 07:57:25 AM
The music is good, well produced etc. What needs work is the vocal track. The singing is perfect, she's excellent, do her voice justice with proper production work, make sure the voice sounds as pro as the music!
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Thunder Wave on April 10, 2011, 03:16:47 AM
@Arrow  Your variations of Mega Man sound very Mega Man to me.  Maybe with a stronger kick.

@Japur I like the whistle one the best.  This is a perfect song for one to whistle while they work. ;)

@Madurai  I think you could right click get link and then do this bracketmp3brackethttp://hosting_site.com/my_song.mp3 bracket/mp3bracket

Edited because no one is responding.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Japur on May 04, 2011, 07:05:55 PM
I've reconstructed my old song, I think it's more catchy now. It's not done though, actually far from done: sometimes the rythm doesn't seem to be right.

What do you guys think of the instruments?

Download https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/iPhone%20Game/MenuMusicV1.mp3?w=75c43193
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Zylos on May 27, 2011, 06:27:12 PM
I have exceedingly little talent with music, but messing around with Finale I was able to put this together. It's just a start of something, but I'm not exactly sure what I should do to improve on it.

Download http://k002.kiwi6.com/hotlink/v5jbgjx1k7/cello_piece.mp3
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on June 07, 2011, 10:45:43 AM
a-durrrrr....

Download http://rmrk.net/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=41978.0;attach=23609.mp3
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: pacdiggity on June 19, 2011, 07:09:08 AM
This is my first try at anything even remotely electronic. I think I've done a pretty good job of it :O
And yeah, it's for RM's, so it is supposed to loop. I'd say probably for intense scenes or a common battle, maybe even a boss battle if it suits.

And the second one is a toccata. It's supposed to loop as well. I like it. I hope you do too.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on June 20, 2011, 04:28:22 AM
I see Tech being a decent battle theme, more than anything else. A bit short for a boss theme, really, and a bit cheerier than I would typically associate with a more difficult battle.

That said, I like it a lot. It rolls through the different sections very smoothly. I will say though that I think it could be helped by a bit more length.

Toccata...wasn't bad, but I was bored. It sounded technically sound, but it didn't have anything to it other than that sort of generic rpg feeling. Also...the muted trumpets made me giggle a bit. Again, not bad, but doesn't stand out, in my opinion. THAT SAID:



Download http://rmrk.net/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=41978.0;attach=23701.mp3
RPG Maker intended, meant to loop, tell me what you think. Arranged off of a stage theme from mega man zero 4. Consider this the bare bones... any ideas for making it more unique from the original product would be very welcome.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 01, 2011, 03:38:58 AM
A....bump.

Also this:

Download http://rmrk.net/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=41978.0;attach=23777.mp3
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 03, 2011, 05:19:25 AM
Would it help if I said pretty please?
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 11, 2011, 05:49:05 PM
HNNNNNNNNNNGH
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: pacdiggity on July 12, 2011, 01:41:40 AM
BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRINGGGGGG!
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: strike on July 12, 2011, 07:14:09 AM
sounds like something from doom.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 12, 2011, 08:31:48 AM
Aw damn now you guys went and fucked it up. I was trying to see how long I could putz around in a sticky before someone posted. :( As soon as I changed from "look at me" to "don't look at me", here you both are.

Poop.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: strike on July 12, 2011, 09:07:30 AM
whiner.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 13, 2011, 09:25:16 AM
That aside, thanks for listening, that's always appreciated. : )
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: strike on July 18, 2011, 05:38:34 AM
:V
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Sashikinaroji on July 18, 2011, 04:07:35 PM
http://rmrk.net/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=42086.0;attach=22720
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 28, 2014, 09:40:08 AM
Just gonna post up a few things:

Cybele Hestra - Great Wall of Skaia
Download https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/85017929/General%20Music/Cybele%20Hestra%20-%20Great%20Wall%20of%20Skaia.mp3
Proud of this one, was inspired by a random fan troll I stumbled across on tumblr at 3am. I need to contact this person so I can share it with them.

Battle with a Political Opponent
Download https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/85017929/EB4%20OST/Battle%20with%20a%20Political%20Enemy%201.mp3
Did I ever post this one? I dunno. Here. With respect to "Living Colour".

Justa Peaks
Download https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/85017929/General%20Music/Justa%20Peaks.mp3
Did this tonight in one sitting. It's always in one sitting. I feel like it's not as good as it COULD be though. I like it, but it feels like it could be better.

Also I'm debating dropping out the Magypsy reference at the end. Mother 3 has nothing to do with the soundtrack as a whole and I feel like it's a bit of a false clue to other things that could happen in the game. So far all the melodic "hints" I've dropped have been meaningful in some way. Inspirations include my own track "bullet train", the Doors (organs), Sim City SNES (mallets), Snowman (earthbound).
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 29, 2014, 06:13:03 PM
Gonna go ahead and bump this once...and if that doesn't work I guess I'll just make my own topic?
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: &&&&&&&&&&&&& on July 29, 2014, 06:18:03 PM
I like them. :o
I don't see any reason to remove the trumpets.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Sophist on July 29, 2014, 08:12:21 PM
All of those tracks were really cool, the dark melody of Battle with a Political Opponent is my favorite. Are you still working on your EB/Mother game?
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 30, 2014, 04:21:32 AM
The music for now. I'm working a solid 40 hours of retail a week, all night shifts, all with additional hours tacked onto the end. I'd love to work on the game itself, but there's really just no time between work and being a social human being. It'd be different if I already had resources amassed, but when I think about setting up all the tilesets I need and the character sheets I just wanna puke. So right now yeah, just the OST, just when the mood strikes me.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Sophist on July 30, 2014, 05:12:33 AM
Welllllllll

I reckon I could take a crack at helping with the resources.
Title: Re: The Music Critiquing Thread
Post by: Arrow on July 30, 2014, 05:30:49 AM
Well shit, that's awfully friendly of you. Do you have a chat client I could talk to you with? It's been too long since we were chatting regularly anyway.