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Title: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: dpeezy93 on June 29, 2010, 09:13:31 PM
Demon Journey

This is also my first game so don't be to harsh.

Genre: RPG
Platform: PC
Engine: RPGMaker VX
Players: 1
Game length: 6 - 8 hours

Plot


Hero's father Light was a brave warrior who defeated many demons. He was also given an orb by the angels. The Demon King found out that if he obtains that orb he can take over the continent. So he lured Light to his layer, killed him and took the orb from him. After he killed Light, he ordered his minions to kidnap the kings family. Now, Hero must save the kings family, defeat the demon king and obtain the orb to restore peace to the land


Characters


Name: Hero
Class: Warrior
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 23
Bio: Hero is a very calmed person. He wishes to be just as great and powerful just like his father was. Hero's role in the game is to save the kings family, defeat the Demon King, obtain the orb and restore peace to the land.

Name: Demon King
Class: Dark Knight
Race: Demon
Sex: Male
Age: ???
Bio: The Demon king is the ruler of all demons, his job is to use Light's Orb to control the continent of seasons.

Name: King (Theador)
Class: None
Sex: Male
Race: Human
Age: 60
Bio: Theador was also a warrior who fought many demons, he is known for saving many people. He was so great they made him the king of the continent. Theador's role in the game is to let you know your status and record your progress.

Name: Queen (Maylin)
Class: None
Sex: Female
Race: Human
Age: 55
Bio: Maylin is Kai's wife and queen. She is know for her intelligence and for being married to the king. Her role is to give you permission to take the boat and cross to the next island.

Name: Princess (Layla)
Class: None
Race: Human
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Bio: Layla is the daughter of the king. Once you save her from the Blue Dragon she falls deeply in love with you. She doesn't really have a role.


Screenshots

http://img145.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img145/3646/pic5x.png&action=rotate

http://img291.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img291/5231/pic4nd.png&action=rotate

http://img576.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img576/580/pic3ru.png&action=rotate

http://img686.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img686/8787/pic2au.png&action=rotate

http://img97.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img97/3366/pic1mb.png&action=rotate

http://img717.imageshack.us/edit_preview.php?l=img717/176/titlew.png&action=rotate



Download

http://www.mediafire.com/?gidylmkmudy
Title: Re: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: Ruzu on June 29, 2010, 09:28:22 PM
I'm sorry but this sounds so very generic, and very cliche. Not something I believe anyone would go wild over, I know you said its your first project its just not something I think a lot of people would go wild about.
Title: Re: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: cozziekuns on June 29, 2010, 09:44:36 PM
I agree with Burst, it does sound pretty cliche.

Also, your image links don't work, or at least for me.
Title: Re: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: dpeezy93 on June 30, 2010, 12:10:42 AM
I fixed the image links, and also, I tried to make the game similar to dragon warrior so i apologies for the cliche. I thought dragon warrior fans would like it.
Title: Re: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: cozziekuns on June 30, 2010, 12:24:24 AM
I played through it a bit, and it's not a bad game considering it's your first, though there are some things that need fixing. The mapping wasn't that bad. It could be worse, though it wasn't the best either. Some spelling and grammar needed fixing too, like Journy should be Journey.

I'd say that the exp curve wasn't the greatest, seeing as I found it difficult to fight against the Magimon with a club that did one damage, and training on slimes wasn't much better as they gave 1 exp. Luckily, when I bought the Long Sword, it made things much easier. I suggest you raise the gold earned from each monster, or something like that. Grinding when there wasn't a save option wasn't much fun either (or at least, I couldn't find the option).

Finally, I liked the small additions you added into the game. It made it much more enjoyable. For example, the picture overlay in the cave was a nice touch, though you could have possibly lowered the screen tone by a smidgen at the same time, to further enhance the sense of darkness. I didn't really like the stop animation though.
Title: Re: Demon Journey {COMPLETE} [RMVX]
Post by: dpeezy93 on June 30, 2010, 01:03:11 AM
Yeah, I'm working on the text errors right now