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RMRK RPG Maker Creation => Projects => Abandoned Projects => Topic started by: Yukimora on February 23, 2007, 02:40:11 AM

Title: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 23, 2007, 02:40:11 AM

Backround Story

characters

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Name:Ryushin
Age:22
Gender:Male
Personality: Lazy & comical, but can be serious.
short Backround: Abandon by village, picked up by army and trained to be perfect soldier.
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Name:Aourei
Age:25
Gender:male
Personality:Mostly serious untill he gets a drunk, never knew his parents.
Backround: Part of malitia that found Ryushin, was his master for basic training.
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Name: Stella
Gender:female
Age:21
Personality:Stuck up/ stubborn
Backround: has a tramatic past and would rather not talk about it.

Name: Kairei?(stillthinking)
Gender:female
Age:25
personality: hyper
Backround: Abandon as child, brought up by mage, she got stronger then her master so she searches for a stronger magic trainer.'

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Name:Milatchi?
Gender:male
Age:36
Personality:overconfident
Backroud: survivor of the war now works as a merc.

Name:arei?(stillthinking)
Gender:female
Age:26
Personality:?
backround: was living peacefully in forest untill war.

Screen Shots

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This is all I have for right now I just started to work on this about a week ago and want some feedback good or bad :alright: ...

If you have any questions then email me at Pochi234@gmail.com you can also send ur comments there too if you want to.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 23, 2007, 03:49:06 AM

sry for the double post...but i could really use any feedback on this although i will make it for my own exp anyway i just want to know if u think its good or not.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Irock on February 23, 2007, 06:08:40 AM

The story sounds great! The mapping on the first map seems a bit repetitive,
The mapping on the second map looks good, but I found a bit of an error.

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi28.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fc221%2Firockman%2Foops.jpg&hash=a3d74912b570037fd62e9eb9f1860b1365d83093)
As you see you will be able to walk over a wall. (look at the arrow and the boxes)
Just to point that out.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 23, 2007, 03:58:12 PM

Alright i'll work on that thx for the comments and info and just to say it char pics will be up soon ;8

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: tSwitch on February 23, 2007, 10:53:44 PM

looks like a good start, but remember, use .PNG files for
screenshots, not .GIF, they look better.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: keyblade_bearer on February 24, 2007, 01:17:40 AM

the mapping is just a little farfeched.

Other than that, good luck.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 24, 2007, 02:16:20 AM

alright thank you guys so much for the comments i'll keep working on my mapping skill as well.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 28, 2007, 09:07:55 PM

i just added two char pics and need feed back and someone who can paint/ color them

Stella is done by Kairei on the fourms and Aourei is done by kaitenshin.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Kaitenshin on February 28, 2007, 09:13:03 PM

Keep up on the good work, son.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: :) on February 28, 2007, 11:40:29 PM

In the first screenshot of the double deck house, I would have made that differently instead of a box like maybe:

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on February 28, 2007, 11:56:00 PM

o_0 that looks awsome thx im not the greatest mapper but i'll try something like that

im still opean to anyone whos interested in coloring the pics and any more feedback. ill PM the info on the pics to you.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on March 02, 2007, 12:54:39 AM

added 2 more charcter could really use some feedback... the maps i have changed but i havent posted up the updated ones.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on March 29, 2007, 12:08:34 AM

hmmm triple post... thats bad... ok i put up a updated map and a battle preveiwi could use some type of feedback since i uped the maps it dose seem empty in the top left corner to me but they just went trough a war and are now starting to rebuild...

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Lein on March 29, 2007, 12:16:28 AM

Hmm, looks mediocre. Try adding interesting elements into your game. (Such as skills), or have something else to spice up the game. That just my opinion, but if you just make a bland thing....It's not really fun to make.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: :) on April 15, 2007, 02:37:38 AM

Yukimora, don't you have a demo for this?

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on April 15, 2007, 03:42:34 AM

O i did but it was incredibly short and ive kinda put it on hold till i finish TwinEdge with kaitenshin since it was one of my origanal projects(we both came up with it).

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Winged on April 18, 2007, 07:24:23 AM

OMGWTFBBQ!!

This looks great, I love Aourei and Stella's design!

~Winged

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Reives on April 20, 2007, 04:22:56 AM

Zomg, Aourei's weapon looks like this 3D model I made years ago!:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv385%2FReivier%2F3D__Fiery_Glaive_by_Reivier.jpg&hash=e421c27952ae93573404e9752287b97c7804e169)

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Esmeralda on May 13, 2007, 12:36:41 AM

Damn, that's nice. I think you'r mapping s good (compared to mine, like.)

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Malson on May 13, 2007, 02:59:43 PM

LOL at Kairei.

The game's looking pretty good, but fix the pixely white outline on your battlers plz.

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on May 14, 2007, 02:54:14 PM

ya im still working on that... it doset seem to want to go away and thx alot for the feedback ;D

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Esmeralda on May 14, 2007, 03:05:33 PM

Is a demo out?

Title: Re: Cursed Sun
Post by: Yukimora on May 23, 2007, 12:39:23 AM

not yet sadly but i am expanding what i have of the story so i will be working on it alot more :bean:

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RMRK RPG Maker Creation => Projects => Abandoned Projects => Topic started by: Yukimora on February 23, 2007, 02:40:11 AM