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RMRK RPG Maker Creation => Projects => Abandoned Projects => Topic started by: Jesse 015 on February 03, 2006, 11:52:48 AM

Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: Jesse 015 on February 03, 2006, 11:52:48 AM
Story:

This is about a 15yr old kid who has a bad day, and to come home to find that his mum has been murdered, so u hav a chiose to becomem evil (kill any1 that is in ur way to find the killer, or become good (normal, and u still look for your mum.

Tell me wat u think about the story, i wil take anythink.
Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: blitzkriegbop15 on February 03, 2006, 10:40:39 PM
Yup you need to develop that a little more.
Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: Master_of_Time on February 03, 2006, 10:42:55 PM
Sounds interesting. But you should explain more of what the game will be about.
Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: Lord Dante on February 04, 2006, 06:07:34 AM
im pretty sure, because im helping him, to a degree, that the game's story looks something like this:

One day, your character goes out with some friends to play around with swords in the forest. He comes back and find his mom murdered. you as the player will have the chouce to become evil or good. If you're good, you wil lfollow the murder'ers trail and try to find him without hurting anybody, but if you become evil you will stop at nothing to find her killer and exact revenge.

I dont know if that is the story, but it needs ot be devolped more anyways. Like, character backstories and history
Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: Master_of_Time on February 04, 2006, 06:09:34 AM
Umm...that's almost exactly the same thing he just said.
Could you give a little more detail?
Title: Battle Of Remedy
Post by: Lord Dante on February 05, 2006, 03:00:00 AM
Quote from: Master_of_TimeUmm...that's almost exactly the same thing he just said.
Could you give a little more detail?

dude, didi you read the last part of my post?


Quote from: Lord DanteI dont know if that is the story, but it needs ot be devolped more anyways. Like, character backstories and history