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Title: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: Illumination™ on March 23, 2012, 05:13:39 PM
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FGgpnf.png&hash=e9840cf3d82b22a3ff4d89e9df22238011952b32)

So I am just starting to learn this stuff. That piece is artistically pretty crap, obviously, he is bland and weird and yeah. I am just working on the techniques though, so what do you think so far?

EDIT: Daymn, that mouth is ugly. Ignore the mouth, it is an error.
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: IAMFORTE on March 23, 2012, 07:42:02 PM
It all realy depends on what your trying to achive with these faces, i feel like theres little definition of where the chin ends and the neck begins, maybe a crescent shaped patch of darker skin? Other wise they have their own unique style. Oh and expermint with thin edged borders, they might improve.
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: Illumination™ on March 23, 2012, 08:22:41 PM
Quote from: IAMFORTE on March 23, 2012, 07:42:02 PM
It all realy depends on what your trying to achive with these faces, i feel like theres little definition of where the chin ends and the neck begins, maybe a crescent shaped patch of darker skin? Other wise they have their own unique style. Oh and expermint with thin edged borders, they might improve.

True,
true
I will try to do that.
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: Illumination™ on March 26, 2012, 08:54:22 PM
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FC0TJw.png%3F1&hash=a222d6a6fb7014a8c19127ef56539ce54bdb8c93)

What do you think of this one? :)
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: D&P3 on March 26, 2012, 09:01:46 PM
I think that I couldn't do any better, so I give you a thumbs-up :)

What is that third face supposed to represent though?
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: IAMFORTE on March 27, 2012, 12:38:32 AM
I like these ones better, If i had to nit pick id say that these ones lack some sort of shadow under the hair, then again,s ince its from a front perspective it might not be required, keep up the good work :D
Title: Re: Feedback on facesets?
Post by: Illumination™ on March 27, 2012, 10:47:22 AM
Thanks to everyone. I think the hair clashes with the rest in style, so I think I will work on that some more.

The fourth face represents some kind of weird happy emotion I guess.