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I'm brand new at art and these are my first pieces. The first three are face sets for the game I help with. I like coloring more than drawing. I'm aware that there are plenty of mistakes and I received criticisms on another forum to help me improve.
- The girl with the green hair needs better shading on her hair and her eyes need more focus.
- The guy with the pink hair needs lift to one side of his hair so it is away from his face. He also needs better neck shading and the shape of the top of his head requires editing to not be so large. His hair line should be moved down.
- The coloring practice girl needs a consistent light source for her neck that matches the rest of her body and one of her feet needs better proportioning and angle.
Please critique and comment. Its the only way I can grow. Thank you.
I found a new program with a better pen pressure.
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Your stuff looks nice. The last one you posted is broken though.
Sorry. I did mean to post the new version, and I forgot to do so after I took it down. Here is the finished sketch from the broken piece.
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My first time drawing an animal.
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Started practicing line art.
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And I started an art video blog on my you tube channel.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QEoiWx9pMW0&feature=feedu
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Work in progress.
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these pics are awesome nice job. i love them! :tpg: