I'm not sure if it is allowed to do this here, but I'm currently participating in the Ubud Writer's and Reader's Festival 2010 Flash Fiction Challenge. So... I actually want to post the work here for critique and comments, but the rules of the competition forbid me to do so.
Can you guys go to this website (http://bit.ly/d10b29/) and then tell me what do you think of this piece?
The title of my work is Actus Dei. It is fine if you want to drop your criticism there, I don't mind. But would you please click on the thumb up icon in that website? There is no registration required. A thumb would become a really great help for me to survive in that competition.
I deeply thank you for your help!!