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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Poetic_Alias on July 18, 2010, 07:19:23 PM

Title: [Visual] Lineart help
Post by: Poetic_Alias on July 18, 2010, 07:19:23 PM
Well I've been working on an enemy for my RPG and just finished placing the pixels over the pencil sketch and neatening it up. But somehow it doesn't look right... mainly on a couple of the rounded areas. Any suggestions?

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Title: Re: Lineart help
Post by: cozziekuns on July 18, 2010, 07:37:57 PM
The Middle Left Pincer looks a little off, so I guess you could add one or two pixels in to make it connect better. Also, the Last Left Pincer could have its outline. Otherwise, when you colour it in everything should look better, so at least wait until then before making a judgement.
Title: Re: Lineart help
Post by: Poetic_Alias on July 18, 2010, 07:46:43 PM
Alright thanks. BTW, those are guns :P But I see what you mean
Title: Re: Lineart help
Post by: Poetic_Alias on July 18, 2010, 08:55:30 PM
I've made a little progress with the colouring. Any other tips or is it looking good?

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