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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: biohazard on April 07, 2010, 11:06:14 PM

Title: [Writing] End of The Circle
Post by: biohazard on April 07, 2010, 11:06:14 PM
Have an generic poetry;


I.V., cold, grey hand
Weak, no strength, can't stand
Not my bed, pristine white
Mouth feels full of sand

Sprawled, I need to write
Last chance to write, tonight
I've no tears left to weep
Didn't go without a fight

Life support with slowing beep
Bed is dark, covers are deep
Death coming, for my soul to reap
Maternity ward cries.  Smile.  Sleep.
Title: Re: End of The Circle
Post by: Zylos on April 07, 2010, 11:42:08 PM
Used the format from Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening?

Well, I like it. :3
Title: Re: End of The Circle
Post by: biohazard on April 08, 2010, 01:49:37 AM
Quote from: Zylos on April 07, 2010, 11:42:08 PM
Used the format from Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening?

Well, I like it. :3

I used the rhyming scheme, I'm not sure if the syllable structure I used is the same though.