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Title: my first battlers
Post by: ryanpokekool on October 17, 2009, 08:30:20 AM
hello im new to make battlers but i gave it a shot.

here my first person battler

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi320.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fnn330%2Fryanpokekool%2Fswordsmanbattlepose.png&hash=f39ba8bf59e294f18bf8341235b01c4cc0172667)

its a battler of an swordsman it took me 2 hours to draw and colour

now heres my first monster battler


(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi320.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fnn330%2Fryanpokekool%2Fbraincopy.png&hash=62ad2a9217f82af84563487ca35a4b4fd7aee3a9)

its an evil brain it doesnt look to good because i made it a different way then i made the swordsman
plz tell me how i can get better and improve these battlers
Title: Re: my first battlers
Post by: IAMFORTE on October 17, 2009, 12:50:24 PM
As your first battlers, these are pretty good! :D

First, did you draw this on paper, scan it in, and color it in photoshop?
the only major problem, i htink i see is the chest plate, which looks a little to round? XD

as for the brain, it needs more shading where the little groves should be
if you make the groves thinner, and in a pink colour, and more random, it wold also look better!
Title: Re: my first battlers
Post by: ryanpokekool on October 17, 2009, 05:26:14 PM
Quote from: IAMFORTE on October 17, 2009, 12:50:24 PM
As your first battlers, these are pretty good! :D

First, did you draw this on paper, scan it in, and color it in photoshop?
the only major problem, i htink i see is the chest plate, which looks a little to round? XD

as for the brain, it needs more shading where the little groves should be
if you make the groves thinner, and in a pink colour, and more random, it wold also look better!


thanks  :D

yes thats how i did that battler i will try improve that the next time i make a battler


OK i try to do that but currently I'm drawing a girl swords person