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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Kipe on September 23, 2009, 05:24:42 PM

Title: [Visual] Delete Account Please
Post by: Kipe on September 23, 2009, 05:24:42 PM
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Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: Zylos on September 23, 2009, 06:30:11 PM
What a fascinating red x broken image ad you have there.  :)
Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: tSwitch on September 24, 2009, 03:29:13 AM
that's pretty clever
Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: Grafikal on September 24, 2009, 04:12:12 AM
I think you got lazy (like most of us lol) or made a mistake (like most of us lol) because I think you took the bottom half of the light bulb and placed it there (or something in that position) and it had a white background. You can lightly see the white box around the bottom of the lightbulb. I would have thought "hey it's a flat white background and going on a flat white background, makes sense that you won't see it" except that you put a slight gradient in the background and now the white box shows up just a bit :P

That, and critically, I don't like the 3 different fonts.
1"Next time ... note of it!"
2"Post-it..."
3"Useful for:..."

Granted, I think they're similar, but they all different tracking. Also, I think that the tag line should have been much larger, or at least larger than the Post-it motto. :)

Then again, you're already finished. I love the photoshop collage.
Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: EvilM00s on September 24, 2009, 03:58:50 PM
You graphic design people are really something. That is some neat stuff!
I wouldn't have noticed the errors unless grafikal pointed them out :)
Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: Grafikal on September 24, 2009, 06:49:14 PM
I'm in the middle of a critique so I notice things like that.
Title: Re: Magazine Ad I did last year
Post by: EvilM00s on September 24, 2009, 09:01:59 PM
Gotcha, graf.