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Other Game Creation => Game Creation General Chat => Topic started by: Wlachen on May 19, 2009, 03:10:12 PM

Title: My title???
Post by: Wlachen on May 19, 2009, 03:10:12 PM
This is my title and i ws just wondering if it was too plain???
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Grafikal on May 19, 2009, 06:42:55 PM
Uhh. Change it. Don't use Heroes' logo. Get something else.
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: firerain on May 20, 2009, 12:29:39 AM
:|
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Wlachen on May 20, 2009, 04:16:10 AM
whats hero's logo? Sry im not trying to be a noob
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Grafikal on May 20, 2009, 04:18:36 AM
http://images.google.com/images?ei=RoQTSv2VLpTFtgfnsPSTBA&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=heroes%20logo&resnum=0&sa=N&tab=wi&um=1

now if i take it and just... tilt it... a bit ... like this:
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi40.tinypic.com%2Fk00pl3.png&hash=b6fd6546cd6e78d05c2e422c9dcc5be13630f1a8)

then i completely just did your title screen.
[/spoiler]
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Zylos on May 20, 2009, 04:24:53 AM
I don't want to be rude to you Grafikal, but a solar eclipse is a pretty common image to find, not exclusive as Heroes' logo. So, if he wants to use it, let him. The fact remains though that the title picture sucks, put bluntly. At the very least Wlachen, try having legible words by having a light text on a dark background or dark text on a light background.
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Grafikal on May 20, 2009, 04:42:13 AM
Admittedly yes. He could still use it, but it still remains that it's extremely similar if not, the same, as the logo. Yeah, it's an eclipse, but I google eclipse and only find 1 image that's similar to the logo, or solar eclipse and find 2 or 3 that are similar. It's a coincidence that it happens to be almost the same as the logo. That's all. It'd be a lot better if it didn't remind anyone of something pop culture. ._.
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: BlueEagle7 on May 24, 2009, 05:46:14 AM
I like the general concept. Its simple and clear. You probably just need to keep working on it and try various modifications. I would start with the font. I'd stick with a simple font, but one that has a little more style. If you are going for a sci fi feel then maybe OCR A Extended, or Lucida Console.

Maybe try a different tone of gray, one with less blue in it. You might want to try putting the ecplipse graphic a little lower, the screen seems a little off-balance (top heavy).
Title: Re: My title???
Post by: Wlachen on May 26, 2009, 07:36:41 PM
thx everyone for the help