Quote from: Hamstt on December 25, 2008, 07:07:07 PM(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi545.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fhh385%2FHamstt%2FBestonTown.png&hash=573d48e9b611569edfa823a9ec3a443bf863f1b7)
>_> interesting...
I'll comment on your videos.
The intro video was pretty good, but it was boring sitting there watching the rain for 30-40 seconds before you get to see text and stuff. Also, wicked mapping error with the lava in the scene. Looks so awful. Like you painted animated red and orange glue on the side of a cliff lol. The perspectives are off hard. The 'good friend' walks on the edge of the cliff when he walks away. Like he wants to fall lol. In the battle, the sound effects to your animation of the player attack is a little delayed. You watch him spin, then a second passes, then the sound effect for it occurs.
Lol@
Quote"Old Friend: You and I do not want the same thing. Get out of here!
Evil dude: Okay then."
Other mapping errors include the oddly colored floor tiles in the house then after the battle scene. Also getting to the house was odd. They kind of just teleported there. It felt really detached and fake doing it like that. Perhaps having them walking off screen then it fades out. Also, the general mapping of the house is fairly bare. I don't think you need the odd 'Up' sound effect after you sleep and you read the displayed text. [Also, I love your shrine tiles. Amazing.] Your outdoors is EXTREMELY bare. You should read some mapping tutorials. Lol for the epic entrance those slimes have in the basement. Other than that, your menus are cool, but you should customize them so they aren't so...Mog.
Then for the boss battle. That's just really weird that you name slimes that are stronger literally "Stronger Slimes". You should give them a different name certainly, also try changing their hue instead of using the same sprites and characters over and over. Fenrir is lookin' good though. Also, I didn't hear any sounds other than the Battle Background Music during that fight. You also might want to look in to what that fight drops as far as items are concerned because one of the victory messages was 'was found'. Instead of '[item] was found', so you're missing some data there.
Overall, I think it was pretty good. There's just a few minor things I think should be changed and your mapping needs work. Other than that, it's fine.
Also, here are a couple links to some mapping tutorials by a couple of our best mapping forum members:
http://rmrk.net/index.php/topic,29966.0.html (http://rmrk.net/index.php/topic,29966.0.html) by Leventhan
http://rmrk.net/index.php/topic,24419.0.html (http://rmrk.net/index.php/topic,24419.0.html) by Blackshadow