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RMRK RPG Maker Creation => Resources => Topic started by: DeathLock~ on June 20, 2008, 09:50:27 PM

Title: DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.
Post by: DeathLock~ on June 20, 2008, 09:50:27 PM
I would like some criticism over a half-kaizer sprite I made.

Sasuke Heshina
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi30.tinypic.com%2F2saz9jm.jpg&hash=09b0e2d889e4deb9b6aa51211f3351aa3d805288)

I'm still not sure if I did the shading right on the clothing, so I'm going to need some opinions if its good, or should I improve it. Also, I've posted it here to see if I did the shading right. After that, I'll be adding more accessories, details, etc to the clothing.

If you wish to be credited over your criticism please say so.
Title: Re: DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.
Post by: Revo on June 20, 2008, 10:20:12 PM
I'm no expert, but I would use it. Looks pretty good to me. The shading looks pretty good. The only thing I can spot is the coat near the bottom... I'm not really sure why, but it looks a little funny. :-\ Oh well, good job. ;D
Title: Re: DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.
Post by: DeathLock~ on June 20, 2008, 10:51:27 PM
The bottom of the coat on the shoe, making it a bit tilted upwards. Thanks, for the comment.
Title: Re: DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.
Post by: DeathLock~ on June 21, 2008, 06:10:23 PM
Sprite Update!
New:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi30.tinypic.com%2F2saz9jm.jpg&hash=09b0e2d889e4deb9b6aa51211f3351aa3d805288)

Old:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi27.tinypic.com%2F21jq64y.jpg&hash=f9339543f7b2cbd86933cd2294940a0b62047e0a)

This is the difference between the two, any comments would be appreciated.
Title: Re: DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.
Post by: DeathLock~ on July 15, 2008, 01:56:45 PM
@Kipe: That was just a practice sprite, I'm going to lock since I don't use it anymore.