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Title: [Visual] Winter Wonderland
Post by: JAP on June 17, 2008, 02:53:55 PM
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi268.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fjj5%2Fjap0911%2Fassignments%2Fchildren.png&hash=33e0d82cb233f559f55b61f10a440d8fa09aa83f)

I just killed myself with non-stop practice, I think.
And it's still so ugly. =(
I just randomly drew two kids.
be careful you pedobears

But...
Please, comments and critiques.
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Arrow on June 17, 2008, 03:36:10 PM
*is a careful pedobear*

It's very pretty JAP'py. :3 Good job. :D
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Sophist on June 17, 2008, 04:09:47 PM
very good! The jackets could use some shading on the right side (or the opposite wherever you think the lightsource is), but other than that this is pretty fantastic.
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: garygill on June 18, 2008, 05:57:41 AM
Yeah I think you're improving.  Keep at it Jap, you can do it!
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Leventhan on June 18, 2008, 10:26:27 AM
Practice makes perfect.
Like the "JAP" sig near the bottom. ;8
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: JAP on June 18, 2008, 12:00:11 PM
Quote from: Sparrow on June 17, 2008, 03:36:10 PM
*is a careful pedobear*

It's very pretty JAP'py. :3 Good job. :D

LOL

Oh, thanks! XD

Quote from: King of the Mackerel on June 17, 2008, 04:09:47 PM
very good! The jackets could use some shading on the right side (or the opposite wherever you think the lightsource is), but other than that this is pretty fantastic.

XD Thanks for the tip! Yea, I'm going to learn more about lighting now. =3

Quote from: garygill on June 18, 2008, 05:57:41 AM
Yeah I think you're improving.  Keep at it Jap, you can do it!

Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad I've made some improvements.

Quote from: Leviathan on June 18, 2008, 10:26:27 AM
Practice makes perfect.
Like the "JAP" sig near the bottom. ;8

^_^ True.
XD Yeah, it's my trademark now. I think. =3
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Ronald Liu on June 18, 2008, 12:16:31 PM
I think that you should try not to use the burn tool. Instead use a hard edge brush to do the shadow.

Cute :3
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Esmeralda on June 18, 2008, 02:14:51 PM
I only think the boots look a bit goofy the way they're shaded ;-; Other than that, it's really lovely and awesome. Keep up the good work :3
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: &&&&&&&&&&&&& on June 18, 2008, 10:42:39 PM
Do they lub each other? =3
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: JAP on June 20, 2008, 12:19:32 PM
Quote from: Ronald Liu on June 18, 2008, 12:16:31 PM
I think that you should try not to use the burn tool. Instead use a hard edge brush to do the shadow.

Cute :3

Thanks for the advice! =D

Quote from: Rabiit on June 18, 2008, 02:14:51 PM
I only think the boots look a bit goofy the way they're shaded ;-; Other than that, it's really lovely and awesome. Keep up the good work :3

Oh, okay! ^_^ Thanks for mentioning that~

Quote from: Ban is her Of Ed en on June 18, 2008, 10:42:39 PM
Do they lub each other? =3

Err, I guess so. XD
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Karo Rushe on June 21, 2008, 06:15:33 AM
I'm liking this picture >:3

Nice.
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: DeathLock~ on June 21, 2008, 09:26:52 AM
Looks good, you are definitely improving.
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: JAP on June 21, 2008, 12:00:59 PM
Quote from: Caro Ru Lushe on June 21, 2008, 06:15:33 AM
I'm liking this picture >:3

Nice.

Glad you like it. XD

Quote from: DeathLockBM on June 21, 2008, 09:26:52 AM
Looks good, you are definitely improving.

I'm glad I am. XD I still got loooong looooong way to go though. Anyone has know any good tutorials? I'm browsing dA but my, lotsa trash... >_<
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: Leventhan on June 21, 2008, 01:57:30 PM
Maybe this could be a good place to look for tutorials.
http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorials.php (http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorials.php)
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: JAP on June 23, 2008, 02:37:03 PM
Quote from: Leviathan on June 21, 2008, 01:57:30 PM
Maybe this could be a good place to look for tutorials.
http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorials.php (http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorials.php)

Thanks for your help, but...
I've checked there before. XD Not really helpful, honestly. Well it does help me but... not that much. =3
Title: Re: Winter Wonderland
Post by: DeathLock~ on June 23, 2008, 04:21:59 PM
Maybe your skill will come naturally. XD