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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Kokowam on January 06, 2008, 12:32:04 AM

Title: [Writing] My Only Wish
Post by: Kokowam on January 06, 2008, 12:32:04 AM
Lol, I made this poem for a girl I like (lulz romance! :V) and I showed it to her and coupla other girls (notice how I didn't show any boys, lol) and they all liked it. :P They found it "sweet" or "cute" or etc... :P Just felt like sharing it with you guys.

I feel like some of the rhymes are kinda forced, though.



My Only Wish


You are my joy, you are my life.
I want you as a girlfriend and, in the future, as a wife.
But you won't let me enter into your heart
Which is why, so many times, these wrists have crossed that knife. (not really)

I think about you day and night
Every single hour, not quite.
Try every minute, every second I'm awake,
Taking loving you to a whole new height.

Standing, sitting next to you,
Or even simply glancing at you,
Gives me a feeling I can't describe,
I wish you'd say, "I love you, too."

Title: Re: My Only Wish
Post by: JAP on January 06, 2008, 09:17:26 AM
Aww...

I have to agree with the girls~

It's just "aww"... <3
Title: Re: My Only Wish
Post by: Zylos on January 06, 2008, 12:56:10 PM
It's kinda sweet. What did the girl you like say about it?
Title: Re: My Only Wish
Post by: Kokowam on January 06, 2008, 08:01:47 PM
Haha she liked it. She likes someone else, but I'm still trying. :P
Title: Re: My Only Wish
Post by: JAP on January 07, 2008, 03:49:39 AM
I'm cheering for you mastermo-san~! ^_^