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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Code Geass on December 01, 2007, 05:07:10 AM

Title: [Visual] My sketches
Post by: Code Geass on December 01, 2007, 05:07:10 AM
I did this for a pencil art contest, didn't win though :P

[spoiler=monk of the cross](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc02.deviantart.com%2Ffs24%2Ff%2F2007%2F331%2F0%2F0%2FMonk_of_the_Cross_by_monkeydlu.jpg&hash=bdd4a9360de80de087aa8df9ab52f536ad4bf22c)[/spoiler]

These two are characters from my game. I like the pencil versions better, my CG skills are crap. >_>

[spoiler=Ross](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc02.deviantart.com%2Ffs24%2Ff%2F2007%2F331%2Fb%2Fa%2FRoss_Sketch_by_monkeydlu.jpg&hash=d5cb4702b182ff9110e6fcf65e915e589428e4be)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Sean](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc04.deviantart.com%2Ffs24%2Fi%2F2007%2F315%2F0%2F3%2FSean_sketch_by_monkeydlu.jpg&hash=50ab92983c51ba33d9c3a27579b1f11c93df916e)[/spoiler]
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: garygill on December 01, 2007, 07:38:40 AM
Cool stuff!  I would suggest working on the posing.  Some of it seems a bit forced.  Try to create more natural poses.  Try posing it out yourself, that'll help.
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: Lord Dante on December 01, 2007, 07:47:11 AM
yes, it is pretty good, although on the first one, the chest area seems oddly flat (or something) for how large the breasts are.
Just saying.
Also, the hands are good.
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: Code Geass on December 01, 2007, 05:06:43 PM
Thanks, I'm working on making better poses. I just bought a book for it, lol, the anime and game characters vol.1

it's actually helping me alot. I'll post once I get something thats not the wip done.
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: garygill on December 01, 2007, 07:39:55 PM
Cool man.  Looking forward to it.
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: Yossy on December 03, 2007, 07:13:28 PM
Well, I could say the same thing for this as I did for... uh... someone else's thread...  As anime art, the anatomy is awkward and you need to learn a bit about how body parts fit together.  This (http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/farp/figure/williamlibodyconstruction.html) is a guide that could help you out a lot.
Title: Re: My sketches
Post by: Code Geass on December 03, 2007, 10:03:14 PM
I don't think my anatomy is that bad is it? I know I'm not really good at it, but I've never really heard much cirt on it, oh well, geuss I just need more work :P