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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: firerain on October 27, 2007, 05:50:39 PM

Title: [Visual] Another Signature ~
Post by: firerain on October 27, 2007, 05:50:39 PM
Which version do you like best?
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Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: The Shadow on October 27, 2007, 05:56:56 PM
The second one.
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: firerain on October 27, 2007, 06:04:57 PM
Thanks! Criticism and comments are appreciated!
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: The Shadow on October 27, 2007, 06:25:59 PM
I couldn't think of any negative oon both of them. My head is kind of empty right now. :-\
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: biohazard on October 27, 2007, 08:16:23 PM
Second one because I like red over yellow.
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: Arrow on October 28, 2007, 05:05:59 AM
I would say first if it weren't for the green bits. Second. :)
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: Leventhan on October 28, 2007, 05:30:41 AM
The bottom/second one.
Somehow the colors you used makes the first one looks blurry. :-\
Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: firerain on October 28, 2007, 02:05:52 PM
New Version! Now with depth and cool lighting!
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Title: Re: Another Signature ~
Post by: Grafikal on December 01, 2007, 08:04:37 PM
Yeah, the newest version you posted is the best. It fixed the problems I WAS going to address before I read to the bottom. Haha. I was going to say that the subject matter was actually quite difficult to pick up. The contrast would've needed to have been turned up or to add an effect to have it stand out better. However, as I got to the bottom I saw your newest one and I must say that it is really good. I like how weight of the image is on the left now with the subject matter on that side. The lighting effects fix the contrast problems from before and it brings it out from the background now. Before it was just too busy and confused the eyes. I think maybe the kerning between the F and I in your name could use a some more. I get lost reading the F to the I. At first, for some odd reason, I read the capital letter A then -rerain. Hahaha. It looked like 'Arerain'.

There ya go!  ;8 My critique. Haha.