I remembered doing this poem back in 7th Grade.
QuoteImperialism may seem bad and unfair
Our empire is small at first
But our power is mighty
Each day and night, we rule with an iron fist
Any duel we will win with quick-witted and powerful ways
Our leader is no coward, instead a brave leader
For traitors, the crypt is the reward
Enemy ships be warned, raiders ahead
We tell lies, to indoctrinate our citizens
We will fight in any weather, even rain
Our leader will guide us with light
Our country will rule with divine authority
Our fate will depend one our citizens
At the rate, our empire may disintegrate or thrive
Or our people may take a dive
Or our empire will be in trouble
If we don't fix it
We'll be dead
And gone as the wind...
It lacks feeling.
Not good. :(
Quote from: Leventhan on October 25, 2007, 06:44:26 AM
It lacks feeling.
Not good. :(
HEY!
I was 13 back then, I didn't have much in my head.
I'm 13!! ^_^
I remember when i was in seventh, when i was 12.
last year ftw.
Age doesn't really make a difference or discriminate the smart from the creative.
All that counts is the inspiration.
Heck, I'm only 15.
Quote from: jap0911 on October 25, 2007, 08:00:53 AM
I'm 13!! ^_^
She's the same age as you, and she already writes wacky stories about lolicons. ;D
And other sexual orientations.
...
Is that good or bad? O.o
Good XD
Quote from: Nightwolf on October 25, 2007, 01:19:07 PM
I remember when i was in seventh, when i was 12.
last year ftw.
Same XD
Quote from: Leventhan on October 25, 2007, 06:44:26 AM
It lacks feeling.
Not good. :(
Well, it was based on the emperor/medieval army time. Showing feeling was a sign of weakness.
Do you think feeling is only saddy cheesy touchy?
He could add some wrath into that poem, and wrath is feeling too.
Quote from: jap0911 on December 05, 2007, 04:15:56 AM
Do you think feeling is only saddy cheesy touchy?
He could add some wrath into that poem, and wrath is feeling too.
I guess you've got your literature senses back. =)
war lol should have a saddish feeling.
Your emporers dying and you're sitting like "Oh Man nothings happening"
Anyways, i know how i was in the seventh grade, so does Halo, Dwarra, Silver and Bodge so i cant say much ^_^