Edit: I didn't get it right!
errm...
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
Oops! I didn't get it right!
Haiku is hard. :P
Yeah. Difficult, unless you do it in Japanese.
The war is over
May we now all live in peace
We found the donut ;8
"For the donut is found" is 6 syllables.
Ahoy, me hearties.
We fight and pillage all men.
Cause we are pirates!
That's a cute one~ <3
Let's see...
Urm...
Nah, it's going to be Japanese and I think it sounds cheesy. >_>
fix'd
You need to fix the second line now. It's only 6.
O_O
how did that happen? Oh well, fix'd
Hah, this is easier than I thought!
-Dominating Atlantis-
Here we come, mermans!
To dominate Atlantis,
and rule the waters...
My name is Moo Kwak
Which are two animal sounds.
Isn't that funny? XD
How are haikus hard?
Unless you're a mongoloid,
you can make one up.
This reminds me of,
the Hitchhikers Guide to the
the Galaxy period.
what the fucking hell
EVA it's not that hard
it's five-seven-five.
Oh shit, I thought
that period was some
five-syllables right?
Oh Shit, I thought 4
that period was some 6
Also, you're not supposed to just break up a sentence to make a haiku.
Haikus are complete.
Tearing a sentence in two
makes it stupid, see?
Good job there, MA.
Showing EVA his mistake.
Haiku is awesome.
Shut up, you pirate.
But didn't modern also
Make that same mistake?
XD
Or was that a joke?
I can't really tell that well.
If so, hahaha!
Haikus are so dumb. =/
Yeah I know they're poetry,
but they're kinda lame.
I love you so hard
Please come in to my bed T_T
Me need to be pleasured.
Ignore that nasty Haiku please.
This is so freaking simple,it hurts.
So please lets make more!
:D
If it's so simple,
then why do you screw it up?
Count your syllables.
Oh yes syllables, gah I forgot about those XD
Lol, retard.
You forgot about the third line.
Work a lot harder.
Redwyn Failed.
:P
C-C-C-C-C
C-C-C-C-C-C-C
C-Combo Breaker!
This thread still lives on?
How could I not notice this?
I can't believe it.
Quote from: mastermoo420 on October 21, 2007, 11:49:38 AM
Shut up, you pirate.
But didn't modern also
Make that same mistake?
XD
Or was that a joke?
I can't really tell that well.
If so, hahaha!
It was not a joke
It was an example for him
Now he knows it's dumb
Quote from: mastermoo420 on October 21, 2007, 12:40:54 PM
Lol, retard.
You forgot about the third line.
Work a lot harder.
This is fail, haimu.
Quote from: EVAProject01 on October 21, 2007, 02:46:36 PM
C-C-C-C-C
C-C-C-C-C-C-C
C-Combo Breaker!
Here's the best one in the thread.
Quote from: modern algebra on October 21, 2007, 04:37:09 PM
It was not a joke
It was an example for him
Now he knows it's dumb
Oh man, not you too ;.;
What are you smoking?
He and I were just talking.
Just in haiku form. :P
I have an accent
Example is two syllables
I don't pronounce 'ih'
You have won this time.
But it won't be forgotten.
For I shall return!
People who use Haikus are dumb.
Couplets are like, 4000x better.
meh I disagree
limericks are way better
see the thread I made
Love is chocolates
You never know what's inside
And here's a penis
Thread necromancy.
It's a fun pastime to have.
So I raise dead threads.
~Ultramarine~
By Holkeye
Still marooned below...
Muted through anabasis.
Not that I need speak.
I lust to kill blue.
Poison all jades and envies.
Cobalts and beryls.
Ghosts infiltrate sight.
Have you ever seen the wind?
Insufferable.
Hear the sonor pings?
A muted cacophony.
Sound of an angel.
Dare I galvanize?
Count moment over epoch?
Too long I've waited.
If not salvation,
I pray presupposition
does not replace hope.
See? Haikus can be good. :P
That's a nice haiku,
If I do say so myself,
This thread needs more posts.