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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: Zainox on June 16, 2007, 07:10:52 AM

Title: [Visual] My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 16, 2007, 07:10:52 AM
Heres a picture of my main chara in my game that i drew a while ago.
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi148.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fs25%2Fzainox%2Fcharra.png&hash=b1a1d59e6785275e855b5787baf0667bd8a95752)
So what you all think of it? Ill be posting more of my work here so i hope you like them.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Lavata on June 16, 2007, 04:51:11 PM
Nice. Everything seemes to be in order except for the hands, which seem a tad too small.  His feet also appear to be a tad bit flat and don't really have much depth to them. Other than that..I don't seem much wrong with it.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Arrow on June 16, 2007, 09:22:21 PM
In addition to that, the length of the upper arms is a bit off. Fix all that and you should be set!

Why is he naked?
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 16, 2007, 11:32:10 PM
QuoteWhy is he naked?

Lol , i thought somebody would ask that. In my game you get to choose what they wear so you start of naked.
Yea it is a bit out of proportion, I'm really bad with hands, legs and feet, they are the parts of the body I'm worst at.
Thanks for the comments so far.

Anyway heres the colour version:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi148.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fs25%2Fzainox%2Fcharrashadetry.png&hash=b933a0761c3e04fb281520d6b2564842da13a8fb)
How do you think i went, i need criticism cause i want to get better at this.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Winged on June 17, 2007, 01:18:15 AM
Awesome! The boxers/undies seem a bit too attached to his skin though, you might want to loosen them up. Nice colouring, what do you use (excuse how I spell "color", I'm from Australia ><")

Oh btw, are you from anime-eden?

~Winged
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 17, 2007, 01:45:15 AM
Its ok I'm from Australia too. I used Paint Shop Pro to colour it, and thanks for the tip ill loosen his boxers then.

About your question about me being from anime-eden i have no idea what it is, what is it?
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Winged on June 17, 2007, 01:55:10 AM
Anime-Eden is an anime forum, I think I saw someone else who draws a bit like you there.

OMG, AUSTRALIA? Do you watch S.O.O? If so, Blues or Queensland?

~Winged
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 17, 2007, 02:04:24 AM
Nope haven't seen S.O.O i think, depends what it stands for cause i might have seen it, cause i have no idea what S.O.O stands for. I'm from South Australia, and also ill post my girl Ive drawn soon. Just a little warning i absolutely suck at drawing chicks, so its way out of proportion and the lines are thick as cause my pencil was blunt, lol.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Lavata on June 17, 2007, 02:49:17 AM
I seem to like the head of the colored version more than the un-colored one and the body of the un-colored one more than the colored one.  Anyway, it's good that you at least drawing the hands and feet instead of hiding them (like I sometimes do >.>). If you feel like your worst at those then just draw hands and feet. I also hate hands and feet -.-
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Leventhan on June 21, 2007, 01:02:09 AM
The legs are ginormous ???
Coloring is nice, though. ;D
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: biohazard on June 21, 2007, 11:39:48 PM
Want me to touch it up?
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 25, 2007, 06:00:53 AM
Ok, if you want..
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Irock on June 25, 2007, 06:02:34 AM
Great! But why does he lack balls..and a penis?
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 25, 2007, 06:23:25 AM
Ahhh... Ummmm.... Ill redo that... Lol hahaha he got no balls.. Thanks for pointing that out.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: mangadude5760 on June 25, 2007, 09:32:55 AM
A man has to have his manly region, no? lol
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 25, 2007, 10:26:00 AM
Lol true and he will... Eventaully. ;D
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Winged on June 25, 2007, 12:06:59 PM
S.O.O= State Of Origin= NRL game between Blues (NSW) and Queensland =D

~Winged
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 25, 2007, 12:31:10 PM
Yeah The only sports i watch are basketball, football (Aussie Rules, Go the crows.) and soccer.. I dont usally watch NRL unless its a big game and dad makes me.. Witch he cant any more cause i dont see him..  :'( Long story short he didnt pay maitenance so mum wont let us see him..

Anyway more to come, im drawing more pics and scanning them almost daily now so yeah keep a look out..  ;D
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 26, 2007, 10:24:51 PM
Wooo update:
Heres a sword i drew:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi148.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fs25%2Fzainox%2Fswordbucket.png&hash=f0b56d49ccf81264eeec928f67a823344cca02a2)
Tell me what you think of this sword design. Ill colour it and post it back on so it looks better, untill then i want to know what you think of it.. Heres also something else i did:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi148.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fs25%2Fzainox%2FEnemy1namelessbucket.png&hash=0d46e341a59c700bdf9f0d4f9aaa490da5fd6343)
And heres something else i kinda rushed. I have no idea what it is, i just drew random stuff and it turned into this..

Anyway hope you like them and more to come..  ;D
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: mangadude5760 on June 27, 2007, 12:09:18 PM
Sword is awesome but it kinda curves a bit.  Weird lizard/bird guy is great too.  keep it up man. 
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Lavata on June 27, 2007, 05:42:06 PM
You seem to like drawing people in that position, dont you?

Well...the chest area should be more square. As of now it appears to be too round and it seems like your man-bird has boobs.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on June 27, 2007, 10:08:14 PM
Yeah i was going to fix that but the bell went for lunch lol.. Also i don't usually do my dudes in that position i only really just started that.. I have no idea why. Ill try and do the next picture i scan perfect, lets see how i go..
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Lord Dante on June 28, 2007, 12:30:17 AM
since his legs seem to be backwards (in that bird/oddly jointed way), you should make it more apparent, as right now it simply looks malformed.
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Winged on June 28, 2007, 09:04:55 AM
The feet seem a bit flat but it's good so far ^^

Oh btw, nice sword ^^

~Winged
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Doctor Professor Nikolai on June 29, 2007, 08:27:24 PM
Good work, add clothes xD
Title: Re: My picture i drew..
Post by: Zainox on September 20, 2007, 08:59:54 AM
Hey guys im back :D Sorry i had some family troubles and was very busy with school and stuff but im back..
Ok heres more of my stuff here:
http://s181.photobucket.com/albums/x26/Zainoxs_Album/
I hope you like em..


But heres some of my banners you can find in my link.. Ill keep posting them here so you can check them out..



Ok heres a Michael Jordan one, hes my favourite basketball player..

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi181.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fx26%2FZainoxs_Album%2FMJBanner.png&hash=4f331fdda345deebe7f495af730987936af1ed85)



And heres one of a Dodge Viper my favourite car..

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi181.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fx26%2FZainoxs_Album%2FDodgeViperbanner.png&hash=185c10f5eb71b94dc75d870245d3783504d01168)

Tell me what ya think... Enjoy :D