I'm making my own battlers for a side-view system. Tell me what do you think and tell me what should I improve.
you can use it if you want just give me credit
i will post all of my work here
still making the rest of this one
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It's Cloud! Impressive, i like it. :lol:
I like it. I don't think you need to improve 1 bit.
THE LIGHT! IT BURNS!
Literally, you need to make the hair darker, oh wait, its not shaded!
The Hair could do with some shading... But it's really good, love the sword swipe and the way it glimmers in the light on the down strike.
Lower the saturation, and the sword gets thin when he slashes down, fix that.
thx all ;D
well I made some updates according to all the advices
wow another white ties temp. user =) nice...
hmmmm but you should shadow your hair more, and make a color pattern which show's where the light is being directed. in the hair. like the one with you do on his shirt.
your using ccoas. side view right?
oh you're right.... i will take care of that :P
yeah i'm using ccoas side-view :)
kinda like the way Ian's hair, but in a different angel coz cloud's hair is spikey ;)
well i did my best :P
tell me how it is :)
-update frist post-
ups i did the metel sholder on the wrong arm :-\
Quote from: Joaocarlos on June 04, 2007, 04:38:02 PM
ups i did the metel sholder on the wrong arm :-\
yep, fix it and maybe some shade at the hair.
ahhhh lot more better =) great job keep it up. :rk:
well this is last version i made -update first post-
Muchly better! Are you gonna finish it?
yeah i will :D i'm going to do all of the base poses and make some poses for the limit beaks, summons, magic, etc
and also all of the other caractects
i have some free time now so i will post some soon
coming along quite nicely,
I like it a lot.
are you making an FF7 fan game?
maybe i will... but i'm not sure ::)
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update- new sword
- new ready pose
- and some other small updates
The edit of the clothes shading and the difficult shaded hair makes him seem professinal.
But theres one problem I just cant get my eye on...
yeah I think that to... :-\
well if anyone knows what's missing pls tell
edit: just updated... hope you like :P
wow been gone for one day and that what happens very nicely done =)
Nice Keep up the good work
you need to add more movement to the battle stance and low hp poses
what I mean is, more than just the arms need to move in the ready stance, his legs should also be bobbing up and down to make it seem realistic.
and for the low hp pose, his head should move slightly but it should be slightly delayed, so that it starts moving up after the arms, and the same for down
otherwise it's looking really good.
hmm ok i see your point :-\ ok i will fix that :)
oh heres the magic skill
-update-
Quote from: Halestorm5 on June 06, 2007, 03:57:53 PM
The edit of the clothes shading and the difficult shaded hair makes him seem professinal.
But theres one problem I just cant get my eye on...
hmmm maybe the slashing of the weapon when it hit's down?
cost aside from the weapon it looks good but when it slashes down it looks cartoony well you get my point
use a 5 layer pallet sincronize with your weapon and it will look good =)