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RMRK RPG Maker Creation => Resources => Topic started by: laughingwarlock on April 18, 2007, 01:09:57 AM

Title: Face Constructive Criticism Please
Post by: laughingwarlock on April 18, 2007, 01:09:57 AM
Hello! I'm new to the site and I'm looking forward to creating my first game. I did use the RPG maker on Play Station on playstation so I'm at least not a total n00b. Anyway, I'm trying to create some face icons for my game's characters and I'd really apreciate any constructive critism you can give me.

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fart3.sheezyart.com%2Fimage%2F117%2F1171867.jpg&hash=a2ac7a503668f655923342592c5b1efeda60ce59)

I've been trying to develop my own style recently and I'd really appreciate any constructive criticism you can give me. This pic is some of the same characters found here (http://www.sheezyart.com/view/903179/) with a few adjustments to character looks. I know this is a bit rough. I figured I'd fix it up after I got some pointers.

Thanks  ;D
Title: Re: Face Constructive Criticism Please
Post by: ChaosSpartan28 on April 18, 2007, 01:12:11 AM
Those look good. Im sure they are just mere sketches but its a good start.

Try not to have them all face the same way and change the postion of the head. As in angle.
Title: Re: Face Constructive Criticism Please
Post by: laughingwarlock on April 18, 2007, 01:41:38 AM
I've realized the cheekbones were friggin huge after flipping them in photoshop. A little compressing action and it's being fixed.
Title: Re: Face Constructive Criticism Please
Post by: ChaosSpartan28 on April 18, 2007, 01:43:56 AM
It's always good to admit to yourself when you think there is something wrong with what you did. It's a quality.