Ahah, the title is actually the name of my new song, i sposes i've made some improvement.
K.
So yeah, this is based on a movie's main song, it has only 1 piano, but i changed it and made to, and as you know Hindi movies have 2 paragraphed songs(in which both are same) so yeah, its kinda the same.
But meh ftw.
I even added a flute at the end so you guys know the "main tune"
ALSO, i have the midi, tabit and mp3 versions.
So for you people who like to waste space on the comp by dling mp3s-go on.
yes, the mp3 version, SUX, because its like changing the thing.
so
kthxbai.
cool, good workies
Err yeah thanks.
Guys, dont say its good if its bad(whch i know you heartless bastards wont lol) just cuz im 12. I CAN BARE IT.
It's a little sad :'(
But still good work i couldnt make it XD
thanks. Well, Morris, before judging, be sure to download it, k?
^^;
You have made an interesting flavor here, I was ready for some sappy instruments like strings and or flutes, but that wasn't provided! I like the simplicity, however as much as my teacher had always said to get away with as much repeating as possible, don't over do it. :D On some spots it seemed a little rough, seemed out of place for instance the trilling notes on certain times (00.30-32s and so on).
And in my opinion: as I listened to both the mp3 and midi; I liked the midi better because it seemed to have retained better quality actually.
Overall I rather like it. There can be some progress made and I'm sure you'll be able to do it as you learn. :D
You need to try using some chords.
Not bad, though. Definite improvement.
Yes, I can TOTALLY agree there. Look out for some of the dischord your getting on that paino though.
Err, simpler words?
I think what he's saying is sometimes a little clash is good in a chord, but don't go overboard.;)
It's good, I would recommend you work on your beat a little, I like the style you're going for but it could use a little more definition.