This is my first game that's worth posting here, but it's really good!
Light's Shadow
Because everyone has one
Heroes: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||]
100% complete[you name main hero]-fighter age-17 you
Dice-lancer age-20 your older brother
Ewan-mage age-16 University of Magic senior student
Hiraa-mage age-16 University of Magic senior student
Erk-cleric age-17 University of Magic graduated student
Rebecca-hunter age-18 young girl that loves to hunt for treasure
[spoiler=secret hero(optional)]it's a secret! age-27[/spoiler]
[spoiler=secret hero(optional)]it's a secret! age-20[/spoiler]
Story line: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||]
97% complete[spoiler] You and your best friend
Deedo live in the Molen Mountains. Deedo is 2 years younger than you and he is an orphan. Your mom and dad let Deedo eat with your family often. Deedo lives at "Old Man Dabba's House" (which you will never get to see in the game).
Your 20 year old, older brother, (Dice) is fighting in the army but should be coming back about 2 days after the "Light's Shadow" starts (due to the war ending last week). You have been getting strange dreams and nightmares in your sleep ever sence Dice left to fight in the war.
Molen Mountains has a volcano on it which erupts and seperates you and Deedo, when Deedo get's lost in the storm. The mountain erupts while you and Deedo are "exploring" in the mountains.
But you'll have to play the game to find out the rest![/spoiler]
Side quests: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||]
96% completeAwesome Features: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||]
92% complete[spoiler]
- Chokobos! (I know that I spelled them wrong, that's what they are called in my game)
- Chokobo Race!
- Awesome new skills, items, weapons, armor, monsters, status effects, class, and animations that I made!
- World Map/Air Ship
- side quests
- if you try to steal from a merchant, you go to jail!
- Optional boss that is harder than last boss
- Battle Arena
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[spoiler=legendary wepeons]
there are four legendary wepeons. 2 of them I don't want to tell anyone until they play the game, but the other 2 are: Fenrir: A powerful blade that alomost anyone can wield.and:Fenmir: A powerful staff. The soul twin of the Fenrir.[/spoiler]
Things That Are Not Working Yet:Awesome Features: Side Quests:Story Line:
- Not sure, but I'll probably add something to it later.
Screen Shots:[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Fdesertpathscreenshot.jpg&hash=01d921221cc40a80c35869b92d8f21bd6220f5b7)[/spoiler]
[spoiler]Note: The chokobo rider will look like you're main hero in the real game (https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Fchokoboscreenshot.jpg&hash=209f4e6374a1721baa3ab72054a511ea10d1a8b6)[/spoiler]
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Fintroscreenshot.jpg&hash=4fe45ba98d8e7073536e76b1a8d071c6021bb595)[/spoiler]
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Fjailscreenshot.jpg&hash=33f7dcffecea50ada81639ffc3bf9466950c5791)[/spoiler]
[spoiler](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Funiversityofmagicscreenshot.jpg&hash=5d73a00248f9eab7c4ab0f31e74df5be0f26773b)[/spoiler]
[spoiler=map](https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi163.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Ft284%2Ffadarkrmxp%2Fwoldmappicture.jpg&hash=049d640e6f4d723fa5a666be3afa748a8c5a70ea)
this is actualy only a map of the continent:
Moshfilon.
1=Kastorukue Plains
2=Kasteralieghens Desert
3=Crystal Glade
4=Crysatal Caves
5=Mount Vagnor
6=Molen Mountains
7=?Side Quest?
8=?Side Quest?[/spoiler]
Credits:Title Screen by: keyblade_bearer
Main Menu by: modern algebra
Chokobo Graphics by: Nouman
Level-up Notifier: Blizzard
Floating Location Window: Zeriab and Tsunokiette
Airship Tileset: Treign
Fog of War: SiR_VaIlHoR
Wolrds Map Tileset: Inquisitor
Please tell me what you think about my game!
How do you take a screen shot?
on key bord press "printscreen/sysRq" and open paint and press paste.
thanks
so what do think of my game?
Mapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces
screenshot #3 looks great.
others:
"Mapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces"
also here you can use this one if you wants also:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.rpg-maker.fr%2Fressources%2Fcharacters%2Fanimaux%2F006chocobo012eo.png&hash=4e6ee10211afbbfbcf1a80e81df5353122aa4d3d)
QuoteMapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces
it may seem that way because screenshot #2 is in the plains.
I do need some things, if there is anyone that can help. The following things are origionaly from different posts of mine. Here are some things that I need.[spoiler=Need Some Sprites]
QuoteSorry for the big request but it's really important for my game.
I need:
Green chocobo knight (rider)
Pink chocobo knight (rider)
Blue chocobo knight (rider)
White chocobo knight (rider)
Black chocobo knight (rider)
Orange chocobo knight (rider)
Red chocobo knight (rider)
Purple chocobo knight (rider)
ps.
For Rpg maker xp p. knights:
I don't care who is riding most of them.
But I do want:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg480.imageshack.us%2Fimg480%2F6915%2F001fighter01vn0.png&hash=2d43e2b6a7c6ffa2489194f6ca70c4559d45f4ac) (http://imageshack.us)
riding on:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg407.imageshack.us%2Fimg407%2F7097%2Forangetc7.png&hash=e0c89089549bdd9e5c7ea683a24d6710f40345d9) (http://imageshack.us)
Thanks!
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[spoiler=Need a Battler]
QuoteI really need a battler for this:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg292.imageshack.us%2Fimg292%2F2371%2Fintroheroon2.png&hash=10cb1f74bb043772bc4bb394e0c35c12f49721d5) (http://imageshack.us)
I need him to have a sword in his hand, and I need it to look alot like this:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg170.imageshack.us%2Fimg170%2F3622%2Ffighterbattlercj5.png&hash=b0dc4791a5c1f37b068d9c87f973279935aa0060) (http://imageshack.us)
But I don't want him to have armor on. I need him to have the clothes that he is wearing in the sprite set.
This is really important! please someone help me!
Thank you so much if you help!
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[spoiler=Need a Battle Transition]
QuoteI need the final frantisy X battle transition. If anyone can help, that would be great!
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can anyone get me those resorces?
Also, Ewan and Erk are mages from Fire Emblem, and Rebecca is a archer for Fire Emblem. :p
Hmmm...Anyways, that desert mountain area seems to empty. You need to post a story soon aswell.
~Shell Shocked
Still.. it needs improvement Some work needs to be done yeah but i wish u luck
Quotethat desert mountain area seems to empty
its a desert! what do you want me to put in it? lollypops?QuoteEwan and Erk are mages from Fire Emblem, and Rebecca is a archer for Fire Emblem
I know..... I couldn't think of anything else..... And I
love (kinda obsesed with)
Fire Emblem!
Do I have any volunteers for beta testing? It's like 97% done but I want to send out some betas just to see what people think. If you do all of the side quests. It's like a 5 hour game (all of the side quests are not done yet) but if you go through the story line only, it's probably like a 2-3 hour game.
ps. for a little while in the beginning of the game, your battler is a little crap drawing that I drew on paint. The battler is like this because I don't have the battler that I need (posted in this topic previously). So deal with it, or make me the battler. The chocobo race isn't ready yet because I still need some sprites. And the battle transition is something a little different because I don't have the one that I want yet (posted in this topic previously).
I hope you all like the game! So who wants to be a beta tester?
pm me and tell me: why you want to test, what you think about my game, if you have any recourses that I need or can make some sooner or later, and what suggestions you have for my game.
why doesn't anyone wanna beta test?
I'll beta test
pm me and tell me what i asked for in the previous post
how do I attach the folder with the game in it to a post on a forum? do I need to zip it?
in the game click file compresss game data, click create encrypted...then you can zip/ but don't need to, just upload the file it made.
I think I get it but you said it all in like 1 or 2 sentences so I got confused. is this it?
- 1. While in rmxp (editing the game) I press "make game disk"
- 2. I click on "encrypt game data"
- 3. I extract the game to where I want (example: desktop)
- 4. I compress the extracted data
- 5. I attach the file to the forum
are those the steps?
pretty much :tpg: And i can beta-test if you want.
yep, thats the steps. ;)
ok, if you want to beta test, make a reply to this post and say: "55555"
I'm not gonna make an open beta test because the game is almost done.
ps. the beta go's through the whole storyline. but it doesn't have some side quests.
pss. after beating the game, try to give me some slack when criticizing my game. because it's my first working game.
like this:
55555-[your name]
55555-[Darico]
lol
Hm, I've finished your title, I decided to give it to you personnally. Sorrry for the wait.
My compliments, that's really good.
thanks for the title! its really good!
I dont have a cbs right now. just the battle system that comes with rmxp. does anyone have nice cbs that I dont need side-view battlers for? I've looked for one and I don't like what I see.
why dont u just keep what comes with rmxp then? Just add a few of blizzards scripts to spice it up a little xD
http://z3.invisionfree.com/ChaosProject/index.php?showtopic=55
Why don't you add this, it looks cool.
QuoteWhy don't you add this, it looks cool.
I made a new project and tested that script but nothing changed. it was just the same as the defult one. what was it sopposed to do?
I decided to make it an open beta test. you can download the game at the link below.
please cut me some slack when critizicing my game, remmember: its my first game worth posting on this forum
I hope you all enjoy the game! (remmember, its just a beta)
http://pixel02.sharebigfile.com/getfile.php?id=128245&access_key=3086be985355ca96f2a837d0c4de20ea&t=460fcd8f&o=F34EDF26DD97CE97483FC17E6C372F69F450DF268A8F988B1F2AC861722D463DBA07C35FBD97CA974E3FC0&name=new+Project+1.exe
did anyone try out my game?
I get a 404 error. Can't find the page.
hmm, ill try to fix that
[edit]
here, try this link:
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and if that doesn't work, try going to the website, then type in the code at the bottem of the screen and then downlaod it manualy:
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if those dont work, then tell me and ill post it on my own website.
i think the first link died again, but the last one that i posted should work. what do you guys think?
now did anyone try my game?
I haven't gotten very far. It's a bit too fast though. It's like cutscene, walk 2 secs, cutscene. "Let's explore". Then it cuts to the end of the exploration without any exploring and the village is on fire. I just don't know what's going on. Mapping could use some work, but I'd think about re-eventing the opening to make it a flow a little more naturally. I can't comment on the story because I haven't gotten far enough yet.
up until you get to triakaa village, real game starts, befor that is just the prologe
Okay, I am going to make a few suggestions. First, encrypt your game files before uploading. Second, take those spoilers off the main heroes as it's a hassle to look at them. Third, PM a mod and tell them to move this to Projects/Games as it meets the requirements I believe. Finally, give credit: You are using Blizzard's Lvl Up Notifier, and you are using the CMS I wrote for you, but you don't mention Blizzard at all and you credit Darklord for the CMS. You also have a Floating Location Window - I don't know who made it but chances are it wwasn't you, so give credit.
I'll play the game later.
QuoteOkay, I am going to make a few suggestions. First, encrypt your game files before uploading. Second, take those spoilers off the main heroes as it's a hassle to look at them. Third, PM a mod and tell them to move this to Projects/Games as it meets the requirements I believe. Finally, give credit: You are using Blizzard's Lvl Up Notifier, and you are using the CMS I wrote for you, but you don't mention Blizzard at all and you credit Darklord for the CMS. You also have a Floating Location Window - I don't know who made it but chances are it wwasn't you, so give credit.
sry about the 'darklord' credit thing. i mistyped. and i forgot to give the other people credit for things also. ty for the comment
just so everyone who plays my game knows: when you use the air ship in this beta version, you just warp to you destination. in the final version: the world map will be alot better, and after you select your destination in the world map you will warp to the airship which you will have to wait on for 1 min.
the only thing i need for those 2 edits is a good world map tile set.
ok, i took off the open beta test because i was adding to my game so much latley that it was a hassle to make a newbeta everytime i do something to my game. it will be back up in a day or 2
When you put it back up, remember to encrypt it.
QuoteWhen you put it back up, remember to encrypt it.
what does encrypting it do?
Quotejust so everyone who plays my game knows: when you use the air ship in this beta version, you just warp to you destination. in the final version: the world map will be alot better, and after you select your destination in the world map you will warp to the airship which you will have to wait on for 1 min.
the only thing i need for those 2 edits is a good world map tile set.
i finished the world map and airship. everytime you wanna go somewhere on the aiship, you have to wait on it for 1 min.
I jsut noticed, this isn't a game maker game is it?
oh, i didnt even notice lol!
update!in the first post of this topic i added:
- The basic storyline for the intro of the game
- The ages and positions of the heroes (not the optional ones)
- a world map of the game under the screenshots section
ok, i think the game is as done as it will ever be. the only thing not working right now is the Chokobo Race and i dont think that will ever be working because i cant get the chocobo rider sprites that i need. ill most likely post the "beta" version up soon
Open Beta's Back!
click on the link below to download the 95% complete beta version of Light's Shadow.
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if that link doesn't work, download it manualy by going to the link below.
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note: You must be regestered in www.sharebigfile.com to download it manualy.
did anyone try my game beta? if so, please post what you think
- the whole eventing after we enter the house is weird
-I can lay ontop of the dad in bed
-Interior mapping is bad. where the heck it the outside of the walls? and you marked the door with a carpet + no rooms
-Game freezes when I exit door. I pressed DOWN right when I left the door and game froze
Quote- the whole eventing after we enter the house is weird
what do you mean?
Quote-I can lay ontop of the dad in bed
ok, ill fix that
Quote-Interior mapping is bad. where the heck it the outside of the walls? and you marked the door with a carpet + no rooms
i've seen tons of games like that! dont insult me for that! the method i used for inside of buildings is called
reedalizing (reed-al-i-zing) >:(
Quote-Game freezes when I exit door. I pressed DOWN right when I left the door and game froze
ok, ill fix that
Quote from: fadark on April 16, 2007, 12:53:36 AM
did anyone try my game beta? if so, please post what you think
Quote from: fadark on April 16, 2007, 01:15:23 AM
Quote-Interior mapping is bad. where the heck it the outside of the walls? and you marked the door with a carpet + no rooms
i've seen tons of games like that! dont insult me for that! the method i used for inside of buildings is called reedalizing (reed-al-i-zing) >:(
if you didn't want feedback on what to fix then why did you ask?
yes TONS of games do indoors like that...i tell each and EVERY last game that way sucks. looks ugly and unorganized.
here is my quick one min house it's done the right way.
i would have to re-do ever room :'(
anyway, i think i found the problem with the glitches. i cant script rgss so i cant read rgss either. i think this script is the problem but im not sure. can you tell me what it does?
#================================
# ? Dynamic Maps
#================================
# ?By: Near Fantastica
# Date: 05.09.05
# Version: 1
#================================
# updated 2005-11-07 by Wachunga
# generalized to work for modified versions of Game_Map,
# e.g. even if more instance variables are added
module Map
#--------------------------------------------------------------
@map_data = {}
#--------------------------------------------------------------------------
def Map.set_map(map, map_id)
@map_data[map_id] = map
end
#--------------------------------------------------------------------------
def Map.data(map_id)
return @map_data[map_id]
end
end
class Game_Map
#--------------------------------------------------------------
alias dm_orig_setup setup
def setup(map_id)
save_map(@map_id)
if Map.data(map_id) == nil
dm_orig_setup(map_id)
else
load_map(map_id)
end
end
#-----------------------------------------------------------
def load_map(map_id)
$game_map = Map.data(map_id)
end
#--------------------------------------------------------------
def save_map(map_id)
return if map_id == 0
Map.set_map(self.dup, map_id)
end
end