This is like... my first EVER shot at editing a sprite from RPG Maker. So it is not going to be very good. I just want feedback from other people on what I am doing wrong at what needs improvment.
Here is a link to the sprite image of a Dark Soldier
(I edited soldier1 from the RTP)
http://img41.imageshack.us/my.php?image=darksoldier6nh.png
Not bad at all! It might be cool to equip him or something..
Like a big two-handed sword on his back.. just a idea :P
I give it a Good, cause I don't give away 10/10 easily :P
Thanks m8.
Looks good to me.
Thanks, u gonna vote though?
Pretty good. If you can attach a spear, it'd be even better. :D
yeh, a spear or something would make it look great!
BTW im the guy he originally made the graphics for :P Good work anyway Pie
-Jak-
Thanks guys! In fact i'm gonna try adding a spear to him!
EDIT: ON second thought... nah.
the original is 049-soldier01 in your rmxp rtp
if you'll look closely he didn't do much at all..
he change the eye to red, and change some of the colors to black and the hair to ewwish brown...
you can't expect him to be able to make a spear...
everyone start with recoloring, but that recoloring was seriously just minor so you can't expect to be graded by me...
i seriously don't understand the clapping...
What the hell is your problem. Cant you say ANYTHING nice to anyone?
I dont think your sprites are much better but you dont see me insulting them, saying they are rubbish and stuff do you?
Whats the point of posting if you dont like them? :evil:
Quote from: blueXxthe original is 049-soldier01 in your rmxp rtp
if you'll look closely he didn't do much at all..
he change the eye to red, and change some of the colors to black and the hair to ewwish brown...
you can't expect him to be able to make a spear...
everyone start with recoloring, but that recoloring was seriously just minor so you can't expect to be graded by me...
i seriously don't understand the clapping...
ffs Bluexx, It's his first edit!
You could at least support him a bit..
I see you insult people many in a lot of different posts..
So I don't see wtf your problem is..
Quote from: thatsmypieWhat the hell is your problem. Cant you say ANYTHING nice to anyone?
I dont think your sprites are much better but you dont see me insulting them, saying they are rubbish and stuff do you?
Whats the point of posting if you dont like them? :evil:
well blue just said that you didnt really do so much for a first edit
and i agree!
Also that brown stuff aint his hair, its this funny silk stuff coming from his helmet if you look hard enough!
Its his FIRST edit, and ok he didnt do much, he changed the colours a bit but just think to yourself, didnt YOU start like that? Didnt YOU start with only simple recolours?
Now, Lets get back onto topic, not how insulting blue is.
Quote from: JakinblackIts his FIRST edit, and ok he didnt do much, he changed the colours a bit but just think to yourself, didnt YOU start like that? Didnt YOU start with only simple recolours?
Now, Lets get back onto topic, not how insulting blue is.
yea but dont you think everyone is over-reacting.
I did way beter then that on my first
try.so its not realy that good for a first time.
Quote from: thatsmypieWhat the hell is your problem. Cant you say ANYTHING nice to anyone?
I dont think your sprites are much better but you dont see me insulting them, saying they are rubbish and stuff do you?
Whats the point of posting if you dont like them? :evil:
Cant you take critics?
He says that so you coud be better rite?
He was
nice to you :roll:
But tyhen i thought it was quite cool, looks more evilish with the brown color.
No one likes a critic dude. But anyway thanks for the comment.
helipluis- remove the avatar we don't want people to think you are the bodge, it will give him a bad name
i know how all of you just wanna go "omg 10/10" all the time, i have seen it too many times it's useless
as for my sprite pie licker:
a. it was made from nothing thus alot harder you showed you can't do that by saying you can't make a spear
and b. it's my 3rd try
my first was combining a mage and a skeleton , 2nd was a fully recolored sprite with head switching and a cape redoing, and 3rd was a fully drawen
so bah don't talk about first tries with me i walk in big steps
and whats more i am tired of noobs
truth and insults are not the same you morons, if you can't read go back to preschool...
i mean really... let's try thinking..
well.. you should i already do -.-
lol but you know what, if you wanna keep being so stupid go ahead don't let me stop ya...
just try reading sometimes
well you really can't do much with the sprites the system gives you, blueXx. I mean, merging two sprites into one is cool and all, but c'mon, it was his first time ever doing anything with sprites.
Now, I don't mean to disagree with what you say, for most of it is true. However, since you claim to say it's a piece of cake (not your exact words but it seemed like you implied to something like that), lets see you try to use sprites from other games.
Use a fire emblem sprite, add some detail, animation and turn it into a Zelda game character.
Example:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv14%2FShadow-Link822%2Fthlinkanimation3.gif&hash=f1225d0d643388f44955e76a44a5a4249c3ca31e)
Link, from Zelda OOT
Hell, lets go nuts. If you think that was simple, how about making a mug shot?
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv14%2FShadow-Link822%2Fthzabuzamug.gif&hash=dafc1303b155c1b603e236f9332d22b289f8d4e4)
Zabuza, from Naruto
What? You say that's also easy for you? What? You're saying we can't read what your post meant? I don't think you have the right to just lightly bash other member's achievements. If you don't have any constructive criticisms, then take it out on something else aside from n00bs.
Edit: I mean no disrespect, but you did make the creator of this thread fell hated.
-.-
you know what, you'll try doing those on your own and then i'll consider trying
it takes hours to even do rmxp stuff i mean come on
i didn't say it's easy, i said it's not enough for even a first try, not to be posted with a poll and a big woop at least, and i said that i don't see why they all go "omg" which i still don't but i think it should be required to put some work into any sprite you put here, and it should be required for people to think before they rush saying 10/10 i mean come on..
oh and i still claim you can't read.. well.. obvious reasons..
because you're being a real d1ck right now:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv14%2FShadow-Link822%2FSeigfreid.png&hash=98071dd9dfb3d3348a7ed4be4078753ece482b5c)
and I did use the word 'constructive critisicm' in my post. Seems like someone else here can't read. *hands blueXx a dictionary* have fun learning :^^:
Quote from: ShadowLinkbecause you're being a real d1ck right now:

and I did use the word 'constructive critisicm' in my post. Seems like someone else here can't read. *hands blueXx a dictionary* have fun learning :^^:
hmm you changed the hair i know the other parts of the sprite from somewhere though...
not bad, but it looks a bit odd
hmm anyways you were asking for an animated something and a mug shot or whatever?
that charset is none of them
maybe you should be the one doing the reading ?
It's custom made. It's not based off the rmxp. It uses a mugshot that's also custom made:
Mugshot:
(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv639%2FZeldafreak9000%2Fsigfreid.gif&hash=52b7ea3859a295d09037fb9b4a22cb5395f4f9d8)
Also, I didn't ask for an animation. What I meant was that if you were putting down people purposely because of their 'minor' work, then what I meant was for you to make a sprite for your own and animate it yourself. Go through all the painstaking work to color it the way the you want it, animate the it should be.
The whole artistry (full body) of a character is a nice touch and I don't have one. Still, that doesn't matter because I am not using the front based battle system that's already in the RMXP.
EDIT: Okay Bluey, funs over. I'm done flaming/arguing with you. And I apologize to the thread maker for this ugly scene.)
meh kay if you say it's over it's over -.-
i don't apologize though, that's what i do for fun and he gave a good ground for the fun to happen
heh well..
continue your talk about the 10/10 recoloring in 1 spot work :roll:
I'm suprised you aint been banned yet blue. Besides, the only reason I made that was for a friend, who is quite new to RPG Maker (Jakinblack) I thought it would turn out terrible, but it didn't, so I thought it would be a nice idea posting it asking if people liked it. And then mr "I only give a fuck about myself and think everyone is stupid noob bluexx" comes along and starts takin the piss. Why do you nother posting if you dont like something? If you dont like it then dont post nasty things about it, be constructive if you dont like it, tell me what could be improved. Dont start shouting your bloody mouth off just because you think your better than everyone else!!!
And blue... how could you say shadows looks odd? Yours looks like a preschool drawing! and it was your 3rd attemp (So you say)
You insult everyone elses stuff but think about it... could you do any better?
Quote from: thatsmypieAnd blue... how could you say shadows looks odd? Yours looks like a preschool drawing! and it was your 3rd attemp (So you say)
You insult everyone elses stuff but think about it... could you do any better?
Dont you know how to use the edit butten....
and no one was insulting you they were insulting your work
well i have to say one thing:
If you cant take critics your weak. You need to take critics, so you can make your work better.
Dont take iit as an insult.
yes, he is true, it is criticism, But some people may take it as an insult, I try hard when i do things, and when people say my work is s*** i dont exactly say "oh okay ill just try harder then" I take it as an insult and tell them that they were too harsh.
So Pie, if you take it as an insult, theres nothing wrong. Some of us are weak, its how our minds have developed. If you have lived a life like mine, with people insulting you for everything you do, you do start to take it badly. It doesnt show weakness, it shows feelings.
-Jak-
it's shows he is not mature is what it shows..
it's not an insult to say the hair he did looks odd, compare it to any other hair style it does look odd
odd does not mean it sux though, odd is odd, odd can be good.
i didn't bother reading the rest of your post seeing as you are losing it even though i didn't say anything bad about your what's the word i am looking for.. recoloring in 1 spot work?
i never said it was bad i am saying you didn't do enough to show it.
as for why am i not banned, it's cause unlike you i am actually useful to just about all the members in every section, resources were never my strong side but i am doing my best to get into it
and if my charset was a 3 years old work, then how come you can't do better, or even that?
i mean.. you didn't even manage to make a spear...
heh well -.-
now as for your charset, yeah i could do better, in fact i did.
i am actually only shocked there is no auto-ban for any noob who can't use the edit button and take critics -.-
(or use the search button, i mean if you wanna see how much of a help i truely am if i feel like it go ahead)
Quote from: blueXx
as for why am i not banned, it's cause unlike you i am actually useful to just about all the members in every section, resources were never my strong side but i am doing my best to get into it
It's true. I actually downloaded one of his videos about the whole 'how to make a scene' thing. Useful as hell. Bluey here does dislike n00bs, but that doesn't mean he doesn't try and help.
At any rate, you'll get better pie. For now, you've got your feed back. There's no need to go any farther than what has been done.
Quote from: blueXxtruth and insults are not the same
This is the one (part) of your sentence that I think people just... "foget" to read when they read your posts. No, you never say it straight out except up there, but the meaning always seems to be there.
Now, as entertaining as it was for me to read these two pages just now, it's my job to step in here and put a stop to this.
Normally, I don't take sides in these kind of arguments, but I'm siding with blue on this one. Wait, don't get all flustered just yet. All he did was point out it was an edit (and very little editing at that) and that everyone loved it so much, yet it was just of minor edits.
He hasn't done anything wrong here (except for particiapating in the argument that he didn't start). If you're going to put your work out in the public's eye, you have to be able to take all forms of criticism, especially insults. If you blow up as soon as someone says something bad, it looks really bad on your part. And wouldn't you
want somebody to tell you the truth about your creation; that maybe it isn't good, or where you've gone wrong?
Now, if we can't get along nicely here, this topic will be locked. One more post having to do with the argument above, and then it's locked.