Tales of Orvank:Eric's fable

Story
Eric's 17th birthday has been and gone and he is now old enough to become a wanderer and go in search
of exitement and adventure,but it couldn't have happened at a worse time,the evil dragon Gourjaru
has finally grown in power and is now a huge threat to the world,but will his and Eric's destinies
Somehow link in the end,No-one knows......


Characters
Eric black
Age:17 (34 later in the story line)
Race:Human
Class:Wanderer (Guardian later in the storyline)
Bio:Eric was born in the town of rivendock,when he reached the age of 17 he was sent to train in the tutorial realm,but after emerging from that victorious,he returns to see his parents.

Goujaru
Age:Unknown
Race:Dragon
Class:Dragon
Bio:Gourjaru is the lord of all dragons and a very powerful foe,but he has a history that might suggest why he is evil.


Features
Classic item pickup system (WAlk over a item to collect it)
Play as good and evil

Screenshots
                                                                                                                                                           
Demo (Only the tutorial bit) http://www.megaupload.com/?d=IYCCRM6U                                 

Looks stupid~

Why do I have the feeling that eight magical crystals are also involved, Phillip?

Why do I have the feeling that eight magical crystals are also involved, Phillip?

Because they're not

Listen guys,just coz i have a bad reputtation,it don't stop this game form being good like

Trust me, i'm psychic. I can foresee the future.

Wow. The "screenshot" that you linked to is a blank file, and the link to the demo goes to a 68kb .exe that doesn't even do anything. Kudos to you Phil, you almost exceeded my expectations.

Wow. The "screenshot" that you linked to is a blank file, and the link to the demo goes to a 68kb .exe that doesn't even do anything. Kudos to you Phil, you almost exceeded my expectations.

didn't u play the demo?

You can't just upload the game.exe file.
In the editor go to - File > Compress game data -

i did,it should work...

LOL

All you loaded up was the game.exe from the folder.
When you compress game data, it makes a game exe package that shows the RGSS orange cog with green arrows, that's the one you want to upload.

You should put up some screenshots.

I agree.

Well to be honest, I wouldn't try the game because the story is just well very weak. It's very generic something someone could come up with in no time, the main character doesn't really appeal to me from what you have typed up. An evil dragon, come on now thats the oldest thing in the book not to mention he has a name close to plenty other dragons(Thank god at least its not something like Draco).

The screenshots I can't see anything, you need to fix them. Many people will judge a game on its screenshots alone, then you have a lot of typing errors (mind you I use commas too much it appears, and I make quite a lot of mistakes myself) right now seeing your replies I don't suppose you used much capitlization, did you?

The features...They are meh. Not something to really make anyone want in on the game, just walking over an item what if its a deadly poison when picked up it kills the player just because he picks it up. Just some thoughts to put in.

In other words, you need to be more detailed, fix the grammar problems you have, put up some screenshots (Because for all we know they could be very crappy), and so on. This is as cronstructive as I'm going to get at this time being.

Isn't it so that you don't share your projects with rmrk anymore?
You stated so in this topic:
http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,5089.0.html

NOWAI, she made I am legend

Isn't it so that you don't share your projects with rmrk anymore?
You stated so in this topic:
http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,5089.0.html

NOWAI, she made I am legend

i aint a she,the moderators were pissin around and changed ma name and everything

Well who's fault was that?

Anyways back on topic.


You seem to have an interesting idea here, just, are you actually going to stick to this project? I think I saw about two or three other projects that you started and then just quit altogether.

Well who's fault was that?

Anyways back on topic.


You seem to have an interesting idea here, just, are you actually going to stick to this project? I think I saw about two or three other projects that you started and then just quit altogether.

i dunno maybe i'll stick to it

That means no.

lol NAMKCOR

Anyways "I dunno maybe ill stick to it" isn't too good. In my opinion, it seems like you come up with your storylines a little too fast. Like it's just a flash idea that loses its flare real fast. I would advise coming up with a plot and then continuously rework it, tweak it, modify it, correct it till it takes the shape that you want. If you don't have much enthusiasm for your story, your project will most likely fail.

lol NAMKCOR

Anyways "I dunno maybe ill stick to it" isn't too good. In my opinion, it seems like you come up with your storylines a little too fast. Like it's just a flash idea that loses its flare real fast. I would advise coming up with a plot and then continuously rework it, tweak it, modify it, correct it till it takes the shape that you want. If you don't have much enthusiasm for your story, your project will most likely fail.

see this is the kind of good criticism i wanted,not the sort grafikal and karo rushe do

We don't bother to give you that type of criticism because people who know you actually as Phillip1776 ( orwhatever the number was) remember that you've almost literally made dozens of such project threads that were obviously well beyond your capability, all back to back with horrid grammar running rampant in each thread and clearly not a hint of skill up your sleeves. So, almost no one is going to take your game making ability seriously anymore.

We don't bother to give you that type of criticism because people who know you actually as Phillip1776 ( orwhatever the number was) remember that you've almost literally made dozens of such project threads that were obviously well beyond your capability, all back to back with horrid grammar running rampant in each thread and clearly not a hint of skill up your sleeves. So, almost no one is going to take your game making ability seriously anymore.

on the ream crafter forums they do and i only ever get constructive criticism

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

I mean for this one.

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

I mean for this one.

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

I mean for this one.

CBA

why did you quote all of that once?

CBA = can be added?
can't be added?
could be aids?
carefully born animals?

If you "can't be assed" to post screenshots, then why do you expect us to bother with useful feedback for you?

no screenshots but you're going to make a whole game.
lol.

this is how the com. goes these days -.-"

see this is the kind of good criticism i wanted,not the sort grafikal and karo rushe do

That's probably because I don't have some sort of sour history with you The kind of attitude you receive depends on other people's impressions on you.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

No, stop moving from engine to engine. You'll never get anything done.

see this is the kind of good criticism i wanted,not the sort grafikal and karo rushe do

That's probably because I don't have some sort of sour history with you The kind of attitude you receive depends on other people's impressions on you.

i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

No, stop moving from engine to engine. You'll never get anything done.

sumtimes u gotta think about wut the best engine is

Yeah but don't go off starting a project with an engine only to find you don't like it and switch to another one. Just try making some key features in your project with the engine or doing some small basic things first. If you don't like it, then switch. Just don't start a whole project and then start switching.

Yeah but don't go off starting a project with an engine only to find you don't like it and switch to another one. Just try making some key features in your project with the engine or doing some small basic things first. If you don't like it, then switch. Just don't start a whole project and then start switching.

i'm doing different games on different engines coz i cna't be assed to even try and do a mmorpg on rpg maker

Yeah but don't go off starting a project with an engine only to find you don't like it and switch to another one. Just try making some key features in your project with the engine or doing some small basic things first. If you don't like it, then switch. Just don't start a whole project and then start switching.

i'm doing different games on different engines coz i cna't be assed to even try and do a mmorpg on rpg maker

you can't even complete a single player game, don't try to make an mmorpg.

Yeah but don't go off starting a project with an engine only to find you don't like it and switch to another one. Just try making some key features in your project with the engine or doing some small basic things first. If you don't like it, then switch. Just don't start a whole project and then start switching.

i'm doing different games on different engines coz i cna't be assed to even try and do a mmorpg on rpg maker

you can't even complete a single player game, don't try to make an mmorpg.

no-one asked you

Hey man, you post a thread, I get to comment on what you say, it's how forums work.

I'd also lay off the disrespect if I were you.

You can't be assed to post screenshots of your own project, you jump around from game to game without working longer than a week on each, and you think you can make an mmo?  The best advice you could get is to start with something small and ACTUALLY FINISH IT.  Get over your ADD and complete something instead of spamming our site with project threads for shit you're not going to finish.

Spot on NAMCKOR

This is exactly what I mean. I took a look at some of your other project threads and they're all short, incomplete and on a few different engines. You need to come up with something and stick to it. From what I saw, just like NAMCKOR said, if you can't even finish a simple 1 player game, let alone keep working at it for a week, don't even try to make an MMO. I'm not sure if you know this or haven't realised it because you're caught up in the flare of it but you actually have to take an MMO seriously. You would be the administrator. You would need to enter the mmo day in and day out monitoring things and checking up on any problems that arise. You would have to handle server payments and issues. You would have to manage staff members who, hopefully will work for free and do a good job, and you would have to organize events and updates to keep your virtual world going. Since you keep jumping from game to game and can't keep focus on a project for even a week, you won't be able to make an MMO.

Spot on NAMCKOR

This is exactly what I mean. I took a look at some of your other project threads and they're all short, incomplete and on a few different engines. You need to come up with something and stick to it. From what I saw, just like NAMCKOR said, if you can't even finish a simple 1 player game, let alone keep working at it for a week, don't even try to make an MMO. I'm not sure if you know this or haven't realised it because you're caught up in the flare of it but you actually have to take an MMO seriously. You would be the administrator. You would need to enter the mmo day in and day out monitoring things and checking up on any problems that arise. You would have to handle server payments and issues. You would have to manage staff members who, hopefully will work for free and do a good job, and you would have to organize events and updates to keep your virtual world going. Since you keep jumping from game to game and can't keep focus on a project for even a week, you won't be able to make an MMO.

the thing is my children,for these single player games i don't have a crew,for my mmo i've got 1 or 2 of my m8s helping me

They clearly haven't done anything for your spelling and grammar.

the thing is my children,for these single player games i don't have a crew,for my mmo i've got 1 or 2 of my m8s helping me

If you can't get anything done alone, how are you going to get anything done in a group?  Especially for a project as large-scale as an mmo.

Requiring others to help you in order to finish a small scale project is a terrible excuse for not being productive at all.

the thing is my children,for these single player games i don't have a crew,for my mmo i've got 1 or 2 of my m8s helping me

Don't you understand? There's a huge difference between a 1 player game and an MMO. 1 or 2 of your "mates" isn't going to get you far the way things are now. Just drop the MMO already. Seriously, it's too large scale for you. Also like NAMKCOR said, absence of a crew isn't an excuse. I'm designing a game right now. Where's my crew? I don't have one. Am I showing no results? No.

Play as good and evil                           

I don't know what to think of that, sounds like it's going to be okay, but that sounds like soemthing from the back of a game case, which is either good or bad, I'm not entirely sure.