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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: threeofspades on March 19, 2012, 02:04:53 AM

Title: [Writing] After It All
Post by: threeofspades on March 19, 2012, 02:04:53 AM

This is a short story That I wrote for another site called Sullen Riot. It's about Green Day but that is what that site is about so...
Tell me what you guys think kay?!

Title: Re: After It All
Post by: haloOfTheSun on March 19, 2012, 07:04:07 AM

This was completely different than I was expecting lol ;o

I really liked it! I already told you what I thought about it though, and I'm not a writer so I can't really critique but I did notice some grammatical errors. Oh, you and your typos :P

Title: Re: After It All
Post by: Relenzo2 on August 08, 2012, 04:27:32 PM

Yes. You have potential, and solidity. But the foremost thing I would say is that you have a long way to walk along the road of grammer and sentence structure. A long, long way.