Why are the doors so big O_o
Wellll, the large doors look stupid if you use smaller characters. That's just a given right away, so if you don't like small doors, then don't use kaduki, orrrr you could suck it up and use the right sized doors.
Also, what autotiles are you using?? I couldn't ever seem to find the rounded corners for the shallow water before. That, and the grass and dirt with the rounded corners. What's that from? Is that mack as well? (how did i never notice if it is O_O)
Well, you have to remember that the purpose of a story topic is to convince people to try the game. It's essentially the back of the box when you are browsing games in a store. It has to make you want to play it if you're going to buy it. In other words, the point of a story topic is to give people a good impression of it without playing it, not to be ignored if it does not give a good impression :).
I don't think it could hurt to explain why and how discovering his lineage is related to his wife taking the throne, especially since, as MrMoo points out, it seems counter-intuitive to what any person would do. "Oh, my wife killed my father? I better become a genealogist!"
Now, I am sure there is a perfectly logical reason why this is so, but I don't think it's wrong for MrMoo to ask you to connect the dots a little bit. Also, since the reason he has to find out about his lineage is assumedly revealed near the very start of the game, I can't see the harm in a little explanation. It's your choice of course what to reveal, but I think it's reasonable for MrMoo or anyone to judge a game based on the topic, and is, in fact, necessary.
It was right when I started...
Tried recreating the error, but to no avail. Still, it's there.