Valcon Sky: Eclipse Legend demo

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OFY8KXL8

-here is a short demo of my game,it's not very long,i just want to see how people think of the beginnign and stuff,please tell me what you think

info please...

oh-ya,forgot to post the story,sorry  


700 years ago: the world lay in a state of darkness and ruin,ruled by the self proclaimed 'God of Despair' Trancetti who slaughtered any living creature which stood in his way.The emperor of a rebel army had put togeather the remains of every last kingdom and commenced the final assault on trancetti.It had taken almost all of the soldiers lives but they had finally managed to defeat trancetti and day by day after the light,slowly,but surely started to return to the world and the people settled back in and started their normal livesa once again not having to worry about the attacks on thier villages anymore now that trancetti was defeated.

18 Years ago: The seal upon which was laid on trancetti has been weakened and he was able to send a portion of his soul into the world of the living which possessed the body of a man by the name of Zeeram,a doctor who had been studying on how to produce false lifeforms.Trancetti got hold of this information that the doctor possessed and started to produce his own collection of mindless human puppets to do his bidding.Trancetti knew that if he could cause a wave of darkness and despair to sweep through the lands he could finally break the seal and be released once again to take hold of his world and no one would be able to stand against him,so using his great knowldge of magic he infused each lifeform with a demon soul which made them a half demon,resulting in a massive inhancement of power in the lifeforms body.Yet one project lifeform came to be a full demon and started to develop a mind and will of it's own so Trancetti seperated it making the one being into two seperate beings,one a human and the other a demon and banished the two into the far reaches of the continent.The demon was sent down the great Aruzumi Falls and the human was laid in the dark forest.
The demon child was found upon the shores by a beautiful woman as she took him in as her own but later was driven from her village for raising a demon child and took up in a home within the great forest where she would care for and look after the child untill he had grown.The name the woman had picked for the child had been Zeph .The human on the other hand was also founded by a couple of humans who raised him as thier own and named him Sky.

7 Years Ago:Seeing what was happening to his two creations he was sickened by the act of humans.Trancetti,while Zeph was away, slaughtered his mother and disguised himself as her and when he returned fooled him into beliving that the villagers had killed her.
While Sky was sleeping trancetti slaughtered his parents and convinced Sky that a demon had slain his parents.Doing these unforgivable acts of violence Trancetti had led each child down a path into hateing each other,Sky into hateing demons and Zeph into hateing Humans.

How about Screen Shots?

a walk in the forest



the giant oak



memories.......



around town


battletime!

Downloading now.

Edit

Nice work so far. Some small errors (Grammer), but good. Give you more feed back wen I play the whole demo.

thanks ,i'm trying to fix the spelling and grammer mistakes as i play through and fix up as i make it.

I also need a good title screen,i can't make the title,i'm not very good at it.Is their anyone who could make me one?

thanks ,i'm trying to fix the spelling and grammer mistakes as i play through and fix up as i make it.

I also need a good title screen,i can't make the title,i'm not very good at it.Is their anyone who could make me one?

Thats how I do it, but some thoughts...

1) Next time you post Screen shots try not to keep the Editor in the Backround, people will think your being lazzy.

2) I have also found spacing errors as well.

3) Your text or Message Boxes look borring. You should spice them up with moving text. And have the name appear in the upper left corner.

Here is a demo of some cool Message Box tricks: http://home.ripway.com/2005-9/443334/Demo.zip

4) You also use the default music; not bad, but if you wish I can hook you up with some good music from the game: Legend of Dragoon.

thanks! that's the sorts thing i was looking for also,it also lokos alot better with the names in the boxes and all that.And i would like it if i could get some good music

thanks! that's the sorts thing i was looking for also,it also lokos alot better with the names in the boxes and all that.And i would like it if i could get some good music

I'll post them in a Min.

It cuts out half way through the beginning for me. Did you use the legal RMXP?

No, if it ever cuts out, its made on the P.Nights! You must install it!

ya it's made on P.nights,i just wanted to use that one not any other

Alright here is the music. There are 27 midia files I have posted. The battle ones are cool. Note: they are Backround Music. I have set the page up so you can listen to them and then download them.

The download will be under the sound player(s)

The music is from the Playstation Game: Legend of Dragoon

Music Here (click here)

hehe,thanks for the music,i'm gonna use some of it in the game . if anyone plays my game tell me what you think of it so far,even if it is abit short >.> Oh well,it is a demon after all XD

hehe,thanks for the music,i'm gonna use some of it in the game . if anyone plays my game tell me what you think of it so far,even if it is abit short >.> Oh well,it is a demon after all XD

No problam.

Cool thing Lavata, I

Pretty good!

It definantly needs more story. Years later he's still looking for the guy? Also, what happend to the woman? She just dissappears.

The old woman died,sky explains that when Ren joins up with him in the forest,she left the house to him because she was basically considering him her son

And yes,he is still looking for the same demon who almost killed him,he was just to young back then to do anything and once he started to like the old lady more,he forgot about it for a while to help her out since she was getting to old to do most things.

The old woman died,sky explains that when Ren joins up with him in the forest,she left the house to him because she was basically considering him her son

And yes,he is still looking for the same demon who almost killed him,he was just to young back then to do anything and once he started to like the old lady more,he forgot about it for a while to help her out since she was getting to old to do most things.

I have a dumb question.

Sky is a guy right?

because I noticed you used a boy sprite for him/her as a child and then he got older and is a woman. Because the older Sky's sprite is that of one of the RTP women fighters.

that's a gril RTP? o-gawd,i never knew that,it seems to be getting harder to tell a gril from a guy.........-.-

I guess i'll have to change that then

Not bad, not bad at all!

But you need more detail in houses, lots more. Coz there is just a black space of floor in the middle.

Also I would like to ask if I can use your system set for my game 'Vakkana Fantasy'
I promise your name shall be in the credits.

that's a gril RTP? o-gawd,i never knew that,it seems to be getting harder to tell a gril from a guy.........-.-

I guess i'll have to change that then

Ya the best way to know if there male or female is that the females are always before the male in the RTP defualt area.

Also while looking at your game (playing it) i did not like your door (at Sky's house. It did not open. So heres a demo on Doors. Just llok at the event to see what I did.

Download Door Demo Here

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7KKWT8OB

heres the other version of the demo with the music and text changes.i think it
s alot better

-the door thig is also great,i'll be sure to add it in!

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7KKWT8OB

heres the other version of the demo with the music and text changes.i think it
s alot better

Downloading...dont for get to check out the door demo.

Actually you got it the other way around boys are before girls in postailty knights

Actually you got it the other way around boys are before girls in postailty knights

Actually where both wrong. In any case the one he used was a girl!

lol,ya,anyway..............i coulden't really tell if that was a guy or girl,i switched to a better loking one anyway .

I even managed to squeeze in Lavata into the demo this time around

The character graphic he uses is arshes arshes is not a girl ><

Downloading, but from what I read, its a good game. It is taking me forever o load!

Arshes XD i changed it from that one anyway,i really didn't like it that much so i changed it to another one. (second demo) and done all that sort of stuff.

Arg! it just finished loading and you want me to re-load it with anotherone?! WHY DO YOU HATE ME!?!?

lol,the second is way shorter.i deleted the final battle MP3's from it's folder to reduce it's size.It also has better text things and all that,i also fixed up some houses and theres a little more to the demo.

Oh thanks

[edit] Gah! YOU DIDN'T ENCRIPT IT! Please encript it first, then zip it, then set it for download[/edit]

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JLBYVDB3

-here it is,encypted and what not,happy!? lol

I hope I will be, this is the third time I will be downloading it. I hope this is the last...

I found another small problam. When you battle you gave the enemies no attacking animation...so the battles look kinda dull. And Did you download that Door Demo I posted on page 2. It will make your houses/buildings look more better.

PS:

Downloading new one now.

Saw that. And where do you find the ink?

Saw that. And where do you find the ink?

You talking to me?

And if so what link?

Abotu the enemy's,ya,i found that out not to long ago,i'll fix that.And with the ink part....that's the end of the demo,i should have put a messgae saying so but.........i forgot XD

I begin play your game, but it has some cut-out for people
who doesn't have the P.Knights instaled..  
But keep it out.

WhenI said "Ink" I meant "Ink" IN the game, where do you  find the "Ink"

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replying to Jack

ya i'll post some new stuff when i get further into the game.I'll also fix it up and set it as a demo and all that sort of stuff,i'm trying to make the maps good and all tha so it'll take some time

is the ink in the game and where?!  I tried taking the one from the place where the black mage that learns white magic rests. And everywhere else. I EVEN WENT BACK TO START!!!

And with the ink part....that's the end of the demo,i should have put a messgae saying so but.........i forgot XD

i already told ya,it'll be in the next version whenever that is

Oh, ok... that clears up alot...

ok,i've finished the dmo of 'Valcon Sky:Eclipse Legend' the link bellow is of the final demo before the finished game.If you already have a file upto some point and don't want to start a new game just bring over the save file -Please tell me what you though of the demo and such things,thanks!


http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FTC0KNNT

I'll try it, and before I play, where is the ink?

the item store. ^.^

After showing your game to a friend he noticed something. The way you constantly keep putting ..................... in nearly every sentence. And then I figured that that is quite wierd, just 3 dots will be fine I think, not ...........................................................................

How bout this ...

It is quite bad and makes your message system really tacky!
Sorry for the bad report.

thanks,it dosent matter if it's bad,i can now fix it

One more thing, I have a confession to make. I cheated on your game in the previous demos. Why? Because your enemys are too hard!
I cheated by editing the monstors hp.
So then I download your new demo and find it is uneditable!
Now I can barely defeat the slimell thingy!
His slime water attack is too powerful. It kills ren in one hit!!! And when it takes your life to about 100 and something it dont give you enough time to heal yourself, thus making it impossible, anyone else have this trouble?

lol,my friend had the same problem.Just get to level 5-6 and buy new armour and stuff and a few potions,it absorbs thunder and is weak to fire

Hot damn this is harder than going into the elite four with lvl 40 Pokemon! (I tried that like 3 years ago, did I succeed? yes, but it took about a month)

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OFY8KXL8

-here is a short demo of my game,it's not very long,i just want to see how people think of the beginnign and stuff,please tell me what you think

Megaupload is gay, all it does is pop up with porn instead of a downlaod thing... well not gay but if i want porn ill go to a proper porn site, nd i wanted the demo ffs.

Jowett,the one your trying to download is trhe very first demo,the final copy is either at the top of this page or the end of the last Page.

And for the enemy's being hard,i actuallly thought they were quite normal and found the bosses pretty easy.

Now was that really nessesary jowett? I am not gay before you get any ideas but other people might be and they could find this offensive.
Just thought i'll make a point.

Also it does pop up with porn, of dirty looking old women!
But I guess Jowett likes that stuff lol Only jkin

Now was that really nessesary jowett? I am not gay before you get any ideas but other people might be and they could find this offensive.
Just thought i'll make a point.

Also it does pop up with porn, of dirty looking old women!
But I guess Jowett likes that stuff lol Only jkin

Gay... not gay man-man gay, but gay as in colloquell..... and it was a pun.... i think..... pfffftf.

And it still does come up with a diownload... only old women!

And it still does come up with a diownload... only old women!

Couldn't you just edit this message to the previous one...?
Just saying ..

And it still doesn't come up with a diownload... only old women!

Couldn't you just edit this message to the previous one...?
Just saying ..

Sorry, didnt realise it was a big deal. I ain't being bitter by the way, I honestly didnt know. And yes... I can't download this thing... I mean porn is good (well this is old women so the porn form megaupload well....) but i want to download the thing.

It does download!!! I've done it and it works fine, it just takes 5 or 6 minutes for the download to start, mayby if you stop your whining and be a little patient it will start.

Also, I hope you dont mind Lavata but I have allowed people to vote for 4 games of my choice and one of them is yours.

I downloaded it too, works perfectly!
So like thatsmypie said, just be patient, I had to wait 40 sec to start downloading it! Took 6+- min here to download it too.

It does download!!! I've done it and it works fine, it just takes 5 or 6 minutes for the download to start, mayby if you stop your whining and be a little patient it will start.

Also, I hope you dont mind Lavata but I have allowed people to vote for 4 games of my choice and one of them is yours.

Quit my whining? Oh I'm sorry waiting one hour SOOOOO impatient...

Dont get sarcy with me. Listen, you've obviously got a very slow computer, or there is something wrong with it, or the machien just dont like you. But dont come complaining, I have a slow computer and I had to wait about 5 minutes. So as I said before QUIT WITH THE WHINING!!!

RGSS100J.dll not found. EXPLAIN. I downloaded it an hour later it appeared and now when i try to plauy the game it says "RGSS100J.dll not found".

What version of RPG Maker XP are you using?
Valcon Sky was made with Postality Knights btw!

What version of RPG Maker XP are you using?
Valcon Sky was made with Postality Knights btw!

I'm using RPG Maker 2003.

LOL! That explains it...

Man, why didn't you say that!?
If some game doesn't work.. first thing I wonder is what version it needs to run..
So.. if you want to play this game.. you need rpgm xp m8...

LOOOOOOOOL!!! No wonder. This is made with XP. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL cant stop laughing!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL Cant stop, ribs breaking, must... release! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOl

Now thats over with I can say that you made yourself look so silly there.
sorry. Download Xp, THEN IT WILL WORK! Lavata did say he used XP.

God dammit helpius. Stop posting at the exact time as me

LOOOOOOOOL!!! No wonder. This is made with XP. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL cant stop laughing!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL Cant stop, ribs breaking, must... release! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOl

Now thats over with I can say that you made yourself look so silly there.
sorry. Download Xp, THEN IT WILL WORK! Lavata did say he used XP.

Care if I break my ribs with ya? LOOOOOOOOOOL must.. release!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOL    

LOOOOOOOOL!!! No wonder. This is made with XP. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL cant stop laughing!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL Cant stop, ribs breaking, must... release! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOl

Now thats over with I can say that you made yourself look so silly there.
sorry. Download Xp, THEN IT WILL WORK! Lavata did say he used XP.

Care if I break my ribs with ya? LOOOOOOOOOOL must.. release!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOL    

I guess I'll let you nerds have your laughs...

Nerds? lol, it dont take a nerd to know that m8!
Also the only reason you called us nerds is coz your embarrest that you made yourself look so silly coz of a simple thing. I would know, I do it too sometimes.

Nerds? lol, it dont take a nerd to know that m8!
Also the only reason you called us nerds is coz your embarrest that you made yourself look so silly coz of a simple thing. I would know, I do it too sometimes.

No I said it because I came here to try a demo, and not to be laughed at because I don't understand anything, help would be more appropriate than going "OMGZ 1337 HAHAHAHAH TEH N00B!"

God dammit helpius. Stop posting at the exact time as me

whatever, lol

OK People,Please discuss this elseware,this is about my game Valcon Sky,not some old women porn or nerds or one of that junk,so PLEASE stay on topic,yes it was made using RMXP Postality Knights and you'll need it to play it.

Lavata, i'm just gonna go through and delete all my posts, soz.
EDIT: Dang, it wont let me On other forums you can Sorry again.

yeah I'm sorry too, great demo btw, but some little things anoyed me though.. like the old woman walking away in the beginning sooo slow.. but it isn't a big problem..

Anyway, me and thatsmypie are not the only ones that should apose our apologies.. cuz actually, he started talking about nonsense..
I'm not trying to begin this again like some little kid, but I just wanted to say that.. keep me informed on the game, will ya?

yeah I'm sorry too, great demo btw, but some little things anoyed me though.. like the old woman walking away in the beginning sooo slow.. but it isn't a big problem..

Anyway, me and thatsmypie are not the only ones that should apose our apologies.. cuz actually, he started talking about nonsense..
I'm not trying to begin this again like some little kid, but I just wanted to say that.. keep me informed on the game, will ya?

Yes, I'm sorry to I just get confused easily... sometimes anyways. ANywauys, now that (SIGH) I got RPGMXP I've tried it..... good so far. /.......why did i use 2003 for my game?? I spent an age on my game and its not even using an up to date thing....

lol, that tends to happen when you are new to RPG Maker, you play 2003 and think ti cant get any better, when it does lol!

This game is pretty good

here  are a few more Screenies



cave walk



small puzzle



bog walk

i'm working to get the game finished and all that but it will  take some time yet

is this going to be a long game or will it end soon?

sort of long,long enough so i can explain the entire story and such.

sooo, not very long, right?

it will be long.