I need some opinions on this. I'm starting a game through RPG Maker XP and it's called "The Sixth Revolution". The story goes where theres a mysterious fighter who can kill demons with one spell. Apparently the person conjuring up these demons has came back and is now attacking children because apparently they have some strange aura that can make them stronger than any other demon if they transformed.
Well, the guy who is transforming the kids into demons has no name but a title called "The Hierachy". He was trained as a High Priest and the person that trained him dissapeared. Now the Hierachy is getting darker and daker due to this (theres a twist but not telling what). So because of this the other priests set a trap for him and captured him, and now is locked in a dungeon with a holy barrier surrounding it. Somehow, he got out and is now changing the children.
And like I said theres a twist or two and I'm not gonna say because I need some opinions on this storyline. So if u guys could please post a reply for this about your opinions so I can at least get a good storyline in this game. Thank You