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The premise is a bunch of random shit piled together for no reason. it is a pile of shit.

Sure everyone deserves some constructive criticism, and here it is.

here's a quick rewrite of the premise that would not be completely fucking stupid.

 It will involve two characters who venture to an island in search of something (perhaps a legendary sword or simply treasure). On the island, they get psychically contacted a goddess. She is trapped in a dungeon somewhere on the island and the Player seeks her out for saving.
In the dungeon they encounter a witch and a warlock who have imprisoned her and control a great army of some Amazons, and Orcs.
When they get back home, they will realize that an hour on the island is three days outside of its range.  By this I mean they will realize that the Orcs have taken over and enslaved everyone almost everywhere. while many years have passed There will be rebels, slaves, and mercenaries (slave hunters).
The father of the male main character will be a legendary warrior. The parents of the female main character will be the King and Queen of an empire or whatever. They too will be enslaved (the dad might die). The goddess (who's character design is based loosely off of CC (ps: herp derp)) will probably come with them on their travels.

the goddess can basically be the white mage of the party the female the black mage and the dude can be the physical attacker. or something like that.

keep your porn if you want but it's completely fucking unnecessary, and only serves to make your game a joke.

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Pretty much anything I could say has already been summed up already. However...

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Honestly, go fuck yourself. That's how this random insignificant cell feels about you, another random insignificant cell. Fucking Alien Genotype

I find it hilarious how my post pointed out things I thought were unoriginal and the most insulting thing I said was: "You think this idea is worth stealing" Compared to what others have said, I was tame about it, yet I received the rage rebuttal.

Well, good luck making a niche game. I'm pretty sure Animefan will be one of the only few people that will enjoy it.

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My Opinion: It's a terrible mishmash of overdone ideas combined into an abomination of a game idea that I could not possibly give a fitting name.

Constructive Advice Here

I've already read NAM's How To. Thanks anyway.

Glad to know you kinda ignored most of my advice then.

Your game world is horribly contrived, if you're making an RPG, the world needs to be cohesive, needs to make sense, and needs to flow.  You really need to look at things like that, rather than just throwing together the things you like.  Even FLCL made sense and had a cohesive plot, regardless of how over-the-top it got.  There was still something that drove it, and made sense within the rules established by the show.

Nothing you presented makes sense.

An RPG's story is its backbone, and it's what drives it.  More than the Turn Based System, more than Character Designs, more than Music, it's the story.  It's the role you play.  Players thrust into your world have to be drawn in to an organic, living, breathing world.

Players in your world would be constantly reminded of its absurdity and disjointedness, this is not what you want.

Please do yourself a favor and rethink your game.  If you want to make a porn game, make a porn game, but don't mask it as an epic adventure RPG.  In fact, porn in copious amounts only serves to take away from a plot.  Look at how movies have maybe 1 intimate scene between a key romance.  It punctuates it.  If you want sex to be a big plot point in your game, there needs to be moments without it.  To compare.  If a game is all explosions, the explosions get boring.  You need plenty of moments without explosions.  You need contrast.  Black looks darker next to White.

Also don't start working on a game without having the full plot thought out, or at least the main plot points.  You'll end up with plotholes and even more disjointedness.

I can tell you haven't thought this through, and that's not a good start.
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Also don't start working on a game without having the full plot thought out, or at least the main plot points.  You'll end up with plotholes and even more disjointedness.

I can tell you haven't thought this through, and that's not a good start.

You mean like Lost?

Yeah, I hear you all. But understand that I wasn't hearing most of you before my flaming of Grey Fox. Nearly everything that was said just made me more pissed off.

I plan on making the plot later this week. But first, I need to get some relaxation in my life. Being suicidal is surprisingly dangerous. :P

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Is it illegal to kill a man because it's a sin, or because war weren't declared?

And is this how you would treat an "idiot", dear sir, or is it just how you troll?

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Don't forget the part about having a contrived and disjointed nonsensical world that will only serve to alienate players by its absurdity.

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I'm sorry, But I have to be a prick regarding the little list you made, because Boba Fail to say it clearly:

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1) Many games have characters from anime and other video games and still are considered great video games.
i.e. Soul Calibur (Darth Vader, Yoda, Spawn, Link), the Final Fantasy franchise (Cid, Moogles, Ultimate Weapon, Behemoth, like every freaking monster), the Kingdom Hearts franchise (OMG!), etc.

Have you ever heard of the word 'Promotion' & 'Fan Service'? Because technically this was made for either because said 'company' or 'group' had putted money in the development of these games or movies & such, You are not but doing it out of ignorance no matter how much we're warning you that people will look down upon your project for that, noobs will only go fan mode while veterans & professionals will look at you with eerie eyes.

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2) So what? It's common and many people tolerate it. If you don't like that in a video game, make love to yourself and don't play it. The developers and producers really don't care if you like it. Neither do I.
No, they do care, otherwise they'd loose money. Second, it';s not common, Name me 50 games That do that? Amuse me . . . if you don't care, then fuck off, no one wants to play a shitty game with an asshole producer for the heck of it.

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3) So?
So do your homework before biting at us like that.
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4) Ever heard of a "and the bad guy still lives" ending?
Where the fuck you mention this? And no, it's only done when theres:
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B) The Bad Guy is captured and his fate is obviously imagined to be either executed or be in prison for all of eternity
C) The asshole lost everything and it's obvious his fate won't be pretty.

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5) It's not random. I plan on making the futa-bitches and orcs the main problem with what's going on in the game world. So what?
Your Taste of Fetishes Disturbs me greatly . . . .

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The fuck is this have to do with Anything here? So I say . . . I point your whole project is unoriginal. . .

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With that crap out of the way . . . I'd say revise your idea, unless your basing your game with images from another game you download it makes sense, thou drop the sex-raping, unless what you wanna make is a porn game and not an rpg . . .whatever moves your boat.

Any other thing I say had already been said by technically everyone else. Now I leave while I recover some lost time from this post.

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No, they do care, otherwise they'd loose money. Second, it';s not common, Name me 50 games That do that? Amuse me . . . if you don't care, then fuck off, no one wants to play a shitty game with an asshole producer for the heck of it.

I fail to. In my defense, I was only being an asshole (though, I don't think of it that way) as a retaliation to everyone else. In particular, Grey Fox. Accept that and be careful what you accuse people of being when don't even know them. Who amongst us has not gotten mad before? Who amongst us hasn't taken it out on the last person to anger us? I certainly have.

I'll be taking time off of this game's development. I just can't put it on my shoulders while I have school crap to deal with. It's not healthy.
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I fail to.

If you fail to care, why would anyone care?

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What I meant was I fail to bring up more than ten video games that feature the main character simply trying to save some chick.
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I think caro was talking about the anime character thing but idk.

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