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RMRK General => Creativity => Topic started by: RPGPersonell on March 13, 2006, 12:13:35 AM

Title: [Writing] Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: RPGPersonell on March 13, 2006, 12:13:35 AM: I'm wondering, because if it's not, I feel like changing.

Koja and Sonnet are the only teens in their town, Derga. An ancient relic known to the townsfolk as, "The Key", is seeked by a small group of rebell soldiers from the opposing country (Cappidocia [good] and Galatia [bad]).
Sonnet has a secret that she hasn't told anyone, that the Ex-Galatia Soldiers know. They seek her and The Key to open "The Gateway" that leads to the lower levels of Hell. Koja is tasked by being sent out of his hometown (which no one is allowed to leave) to return Sonnet and The Key.

And somewhere in there, I forgot to mention, a war breaks out between Cappidocia and Galatia and Galatia believes that Derga is an HQ for Cappidocia forces.
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: monster-doog on March 13, 2006, 01:41:36 AM: That's a pretty good story.
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: Viper on March 13, 2006, 02:43:48 AM: There's going to have to be more in depth coverage of the story if you are going to branch it off like that. However the basis of the story sounds appealing and is unique in its own right. 8)
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: haloOfTheSun on March 13, 2006, 03:51:17 AM: This doesn't belong in Troubleshooting. :?
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: Mental on March 13, 2006, 08:20:25 PM: LMAO read the posts
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That's a pretty good story.

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There's going to have to be more in depth coverage of the story if you are going to branch it off like that. However the basis of the story sounds appealing and is unique in its own right.

THEN WE LOOK T HOTS

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This doesn't belong in Troubleshooting.
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: RPGPersonell on March 13, 2006, 08:30:13 PM: Quote from: HaloOfTheSun
This doesn't belong in Troubleshooting. :?

Well being part of a game, I thought it would...meh...
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: Inaru on March 13, 2006, 11:09:45 PM: I'm so confused..... Try writing in some more detail.
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: zxm on March 13, 2006, 11:10:41 PM: True, this seems more like a plot.
Title: Vivid Destiny Story Poll
Post by: RPGPersonell on March 14, 2006, 09:17:21 PM: I know, these are just the basics, it's going to be more in depth than just that. Thanks for the help.