Light's Shadow

This is my first game that's worth posting here, but it's really good!

Light's Shadow

Because everyone has one

Heroes: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||] 100% complete

[you name main hero]-fighter     age-17     you
Dice-lancer           age-20     your older brother
Ewan-mage          age-16     University of Magic senior student
Hiraa-mage          age-16     University of Magic senior student
Erk-cleric             age-17     University of Magic graduated student
Rebecca-hunter    age-18     young girl that loves to hunt for treasure

Spoiler for secret hero(optional):

it's a secret!     age-27

Spoiler for secret hero(optional):

it's a secret!     age-20

Story line: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||] 97% complete

Spoiler for:

     You and your best friend Deedo live in the Molen Mountains. Deedo is 2 years younger than you and he is an orphan. Your mom and dad let Deedo eat with your family often. Deedo lives at "Old Man Dabba's House" (which you will never get to see in the game).

     Your 20 year old, older brother, (Dice) is fighting in the army but should be coming back about 2 days after the "Light's Shadow" starts (due to the war ending last week). You have been getting strange dreams and nightmares in your sleep ever sence Dice left to fight in the war.

     Molen Mountains has a volcano on it which erupts and seperates you and Deedo, when Deedo get's lost in the storm. The mountain erupts while you and Deedo are "exploring" in the mountains.

But you'll have to play the game to find out the rest!

Side quests: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||] 96% complete

Awesome Features: [|||||||||||||||||||||||||] 92% complete

Spoiler for:

• Chokobos! (I know that I spelled them wrong, that's what they are called in my game)
• Chokobo Race!
• Awesome new skills, items, weapons, armor, monsters, status effects, class, and animations that I made!
• World Map/Air Ship
• side quests
• if you try to steal from a merchant, you go to jail!
• Optional boss that is harder than last boss
• Battle Arena

Spoiler for legendary wepeons:

there are four legendary wepeons. 2 of them I don't want to tell anyone until they play the game, but the other 2 are:
Fenrir: A powerful blade that alomost anyone can wield.
and:
Fenmir: A powerful staff. The soul twin of the Fenrir.

Things That Are Not Working Yet:
Awesome Features:

• Chokobo Race

Side Quests:

• Some Side Quests

Story Line:

• Not sure, but I'll probably add something to it later.

Screen Shots:

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Note: The chokobo rider will look like you're main hero in the real game

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Spoiler for map:

this is actualy only a map of the continent: Moshfilon.
1=Kastorukue Plains
2=Kasteralieghens Desert
3=Crystal Glade
4=Crysatal Caves
5=Mount Vagnor
6=Molen Mountains
7=?Side Quest?
8=?Side Quest?

Credits:
Title Screen by: keyblade_bearer
Main Menu by: modern algebra
Chokobo Graphics by: Nouman
Level-up Notifier: Blizzard
Floating Location Window: Zeriab and Tsunokiette
Airship Tileset: Treign
Fog of War: SiR_VaIlHoR
Wolrds Map Tileset: Inquisitor

Please tell me what you think about my game!

How do you take a screen shot?

on key bord press "printscreen/sysRq" and open paint and press paste.

thanks

so what do think of my game?

Mapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces

screenshot #3 looks great.

others:

"Mapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces"

also here you can use this one if you wants also:

Mapping needs improvement, too many empty spaces

it may seem that way because screenshot #2 is in the plains.

I do need some things, if there is anyone that can help. The following things are origionaly from different posts of mine. Here are some things that I need.

Spoiler for Need Some Sprites:

Sorry for the big request but it's really important for my game.


I need:

Green chocobo knight (rider)
Pink chocobo knight (rider)
Blue chocobo knight (rider)
White chocobo knight (rider)
Black chocobo knight (rider)
Orange chocobo knight (rider)
Red chocobo knight (rider)
Purple chocobo knight (rider)

ps.
For Rpg maker xp p. knights:

I don't care who is riding most of them.
But I do want:


riding on:


Thanks!

Spoiler for Need a Battler:

I really need a battler for this:

I need him to have a sword in his hand, and I need it to look alot like this:

But I don't want him to have armor on. I need him to have the clothes that he is wearing in the sprite set.


This is really important! please someone help me!
Thank you so much if you help!

Spoiler for Need a Battle Transition:

I need the final frantisy X battle transition. If anyone can help, that would be great!

can anyone get me those resorces?

Also, Ewan and Erk are mages from Fire Emblem, and Rebecca is a archer for Fire Emblem. :p

Hmmm...Anyways, that desert mountain area seems to empty. You need to post a story soon aswell.

~Shell Shocked

Still.. it needs improvement Some work needs to be done yeah but i wish u luck

that desert mountain area seems to empty

its a desert! what do you want me to put in it? lollypops?

Ewan and Erk are mages from Fire Emblem, and Rebecca is a archer for Fire Emblem

I know..... I couldn't think of anything else..... And I love (kinda obsesed with) Fire Emblem!

Do I have any volunteers for beta testing? It's like 97% done but I want to send out some betas just to see what people think. If you do all of the side quests. It’s like a 5 hour game (all of the side quests are not done yet) but if you go through the story line only, it's probably like a 2-3 hour game.

ps. for a little while in the beginning of the game, your battler is a little crap drawing that I drew on paint. The battler is like this because I don’t have the battler that I need (posted in this topic previously). So deal with it, or make me the battler. The chocobo race isn't ready yet because I still need some sprites. And the battle transition is something a little different because I don’t have the one that I want yet (posted in this topic previously).

I hope you all like the game! So who wants to be a beta tester?

pm me and tell me: why you want to test, what you think about my game, if you have any recourses that I need or can make some sooner or later, and what suggestions you have for my game.

why doesn't anyone wanna beta test?

I'll beta test

pm me and tell me what i asked for in the previous post

how do I attach the folder with the game in it to a post on a forum? do I need to zip it?

in the game click file compresss game data, click create encrypted...then you can zip/ but don't need to, just upload the file it made.

I think I get it but you said it all in like 1 or 2 sentences so I got confused. is this it?

• 1. While in rmxp (editing the game) I press "make game disk"
• 2. I click on "encrypt game data"
• 3. I extract the game to where I want (example: desktop)
• 4. I compress the extracted data
• 5. I attach the file to the forum

are those the steps?

pretty much  And i can beta-test if you want.

yep, thats the steps. 

ok, if you want to beta test, make a reply to this post and say: "55555"
I'm not gonna make an open beta test because the game is almost done.

ps. the beta go's through the whole storyline. but it doesn't have some side quests.
pss. after beating the game, try to give me some slack when criticizing my game. because it's my first working game.

like this:

55555-[your name]

55555-[Darico]

lol

Hm, I've finished your title, I decided to give it to you personnally. Sorrry for the wait.