Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!

So this is my first home made character for my new game...

Name: Law
Age: 23
Specialist: Swordsmanship; anything with a sharp edge...



Not yet finished...

I think it looks good i give it a 8/10

i liked it too, good job!!!!!!!
9/10!!!!!

yeah friggin awesome! 9/10 keep up the good work!

Not bad, 8/10 :evil:

Thanx for all the comments, I will eventually finish it, hadn't been on to finish it though ( and a little busy ), but thanx again for the comments, more would be welcome though

The detail is excellent.  My only suggestion is to fix his hair... maybe the outline is too dark?  It stands out against the rest of it.  I think if you outline it with a dark (but not too dark) grey, it'll look better.  Or maybe add more gradient to it.

OK thx, I'll do that.

yeah the hair has too dark an outline. its good, but he seems a little bit evilish for a hero.

I love the Design of the character, Visualy. I would work on the personality. I thin kall ahcaracters should have thier own personality. (even though my Game doesnt show it terribly well)